Reviews for Alone On the Water
Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I'm crying so much. Your story had me so emotionally involved...
The Victorious Riot chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?! Seriously though. This is phenomenal. Not only is this a beautifully crafted story, but it's so true to the Sherlock and John relationship. It's easy to push too hard when it comes to their feelings for each other, but you show restraint at every turn. There is so much they don't say because they don't need to. In my experience, it's quite rare someone acknowledges the gravity of what Sherlock and John share without blurring the lines of canon. This story is one of those rare occurrences and I credit you fully for the work you've done here. Stunning. I simply have no other words.
Mesonoxian chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Heart. Breaking.
wynnebat chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
I cried. Beautiful, amazing story.
BadWolf968 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
wow. nothing else to say, just wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
i love you too

Goomba Fortress chapter 1 . 8/31/2012

It's a respectable way for him to die. Almost perfect that the one thing to kill him would be completely outside his control.

This was amazing. I don't even know what I'm feeling now.
tjPCfreak chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Wow. Just...
I've been sitting here for 20mins just trying to think of the words...

Not many authors have the ability to write something so moving it makes someone cry their eyes out.
But somehow you've done just that.

It's terribly beautiful.
Heartbreakingly wonderful.
And most of all, splendidly written.
RedRibbonsGirl chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
First things first,I had to wait a few minutes before writing this because I was crying to much. This piece is just so beautifully devastating.

Poor Sherlock. Poor John. The way your show their relationship with each other is absolutely wonderful. It's amazing because no one has ever really relied on someone as much as they do each other. But it's horrible because John will never be able to get over this, or want to.
Icefairy chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Damn. Run out of tissues...
Fabulously written.
givemebrilliance chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Dammit. Usually I start off a review with a compliment, a critque then a few more compiments then a reminder critque. But right now I can't really think of any critques but that may be because I can barely see through all my damn tears. The characters were brilliant, from their speech down to their reactions. I really think you hit the nail on the head with Sherlock's and John's relationship. There wasn't too much Johnlock but there were still those subtle moments of friendship that you and the show have beautifully displayed. The way the story was all laid out with the breaks and everything was really well done, defying my original reaction. I thought maybe it would seem to chopy and cut-off and it does do this in a way but it works wonders with the plot line. Oh the plot... Part of me hates you because OHMYGOD /crying/. But part of me loves you because you went there when no one else really wanted to. Just have to say overall, thanks for making me ball my eyeballs out and well done.
Procrastinations chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I've lost count of how many stories I've read on here, and yours is the first to actually make me cry. This is heartwrenchingly beautiful and perfect.
pookie-pookie chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
This is just, perfectly, pefect. There are no other words.
whydowematter chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This is really quite beautiful though. The's perfect. But you really set the mood up perfectly for his death. All the prep and then the final scene...Wow. Just wow. Congratulations on such a magnificent piece of work.
wholocked98 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This was absolutely amazing, it made me cry! You are extremely talented, and I loved reading this, even if it did make me emotional. But that's what good stories do, right? Thank you so much!
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