Reviews for Along A Small Corner of Bhujerba
Triplestar89 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Very interesting ending.

The good captain man-handling balthier?

Sounds like a doujinshi.
zeynel chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
*grins* I just LOVE this! it was fun, and cute. Balthier, Balthier, taking avantage of poor little vaan that way, shame on you!
FifthDayOfMay chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I couldn't really follow this story at all. You might want to have someone edit it because the grammar was so bad that I had a hard time figuring out what you were trying to say. English is probably your second language right? If that's so I can understand why you were having trouble. The idea was pretty good from what I could understand of it. I'm sure that once you get a better grasp ofthe language that you'll be a really good writer.