Reviews for The Prophecy Child
kiro10 chapter 23 . 2/27/2014
it would add to the story if you had shigura train him in wepon use
kusanagi.godou.10 chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
hmm plss can you reduce using kenichi thought , said or any other that make it hard to read ans plss make a some comedy in it!
A simple fool chapter 30 . 6/14/2013
Cool at first but no overall changes, perhaps later?
Anonimus fan chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I like this story already, however you've made the same mistake as many other people have.
You've made the story progress a tiny bit too quickly, although its better than loads of peoples, you need to structure it a bit better aswell.
But the story line is good, and im enjoying the story and hope for more.
Thanke you.
akane-san chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
You are awesome. Don't lose hope on your story. People weren't reviewing much because they were busy reading your awesome fanfic. Continue writing this story of awesomeness.
Epicweaver chapter 30 . 7/3/2012
Honestly I'm sorta disappointed with the story overall. There have been minor detours from canon... Kenichi's hidden power, slightly more romance with Miu, and a mostly pointless OC... but the whole piggybacking canon has just sucked the last ten or so chapters... feels like reading the manga all over again but without the visuals.

Your story just needs to be more... different than canon... otherwise it's just a waste if time.

And your story summary definitely could use some work.
Red chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
well kinichi maybe its that time of the month
Red chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
WHAT! you dont talk to men about feelings.
Red chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
apachi rules
Red chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
oh kinichi i feel your pain i to love plants. can't fight. and love blondes. and im about to lose my place in a dojo next week
rebelliousshays chapter 30 . 4/19/2012
about the time were episode 50 ended please continue writing this story
GxTBilly chapter 28 . 3/25/2012
This is a really interesting story i always kinda hated the really wimpy side of kenichi it's still here in this story but not much this story deserves alot more review then it has
Formerly-Known-As-Devil chapter 28 . 2/28/2012
Omg I absolutely love this fanfic and I think it should have way more reviews like 12'000 reviews. please keep on writing.
SonYukiGoku'sSister chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Awesome chapter 27 . 1/5/2012
This is awesome

Hurry and update plz
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