Reviews for Goodbye, my almost lover
fayevalentines chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
I'd just like to point out a grammatical error towards th

end. You wrote "Their dead", I think it should be "They are

" or "They're" if I'm not wrong. Apart from that, I enjoyed reading the fic. It was short and simple and that's one of it's strength - made it easy to read and contemplate. The scenario of Naruto killing both Sasuke and Sakura is very plausible considering how deadly the Kyuubi is. I don't imagine Sasuke being as concerned in the reality of the manga, perhaps that's where he seemed a little OOC. Still, I liked how you portrayed Sakura. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
It's a great story!
Ellie chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Oh wow... I actually started to cry reading this. Who knew stories like this could be that powerful? I just might make a favfic account just to favorite this story...

So amazing... I hope to read more like this from you... :)
Ellie chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Oh wow... I actually started to cry reading this. Who knew stories like this could be that powerful? I just might make a favfic account just to favorite this story...

So amazing... I hope to read more like this from you... :)
miss anonymous chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
the summary caught my eye with that regina spektor "hero" bit, but wow this was really sad, i almost cried at the last part... :(
SantaSnowY chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I like de twist! But aw..naruto.. /

Thanks for this wonderful story! )
Destroyed Illusions chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
:O nerghsphagCKYFGIb;fr, NARUTO...

i swear...wow, i'm half-crying now...if the manga ends like this, i'm gonna live in denial for the rest of my life.

but, wow, this is pretty damn awesome. good job.
livelaughlovepen27 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
such a beautiful story!
notanormalgirl163 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
whoa...

my heart is breaking n i am crumblin away

under the power of this fanfic

one of the best i have ever read
CrystalKat14 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
meep! I think more than half of me just died reading that! And it didn't help that I listened to Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy while doing so... I can actually imagine the actual manga ending that way it would be so cruel yet so totally called for. awesome stuff!
KillerMay chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I'm tearing up. ):

KAKAASHIIIIIIIII!

It was so sad though! "Who killed them?"

"I did..."

"Get out."

Team 7 has too much to deal with. Let Team 8 deal with it. No one on their team has died or left yet.
J x Legacy chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
beautiful in it's own tragic and heartbreaking way. sometimes the stories are better when they come to live their own life,neh?