Reviews for Short Business
Sachita chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Very nice story. I liked how you drew parallels between the man at the bar and Adam but also clarified, that the man only looks like him and there is no one for Ros who can replace Adam. Well-written, Great job :)
Novindalf chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Oh, this is wonderful. I love the overlap of her memories with Adam with this stranger, and especially like the final sentence )