Reviews for AApokespecs schoolacademy
tigrun chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
love it do some more
SpecialPikachu chapter 6 . 8/7/2011
The actions are great. I can't wait for the next chapter
PreciousAll chapter 4 . 7/4/2011
Wuah... finally, blue meet silver! yay! somehow it makes me smile. kekeke..

i don't have any suggestion about the song etc. sorry. but, just write it. i'll read. i hope the next is more interesting

and, there're some mistakes on your writing. please check that XP
SpecialPikachu chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
This chapter is good and the flashback isn't stupid. I like it when Silver and Rose talked in flashback:

"stupid rain"

"the rain is not stupid. that's the way i look at it. i think its pretty-

"pretty stupid" mumble silver

keep on writing, I'll be waiting
PreciousAll chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
Well, sorry... i kinda feel your plot is flat. it doesn't make me smile or laugh. and it's not a serious story either.

i suggest you more describe all the things (effect, setting, etc) in your writing (though mine isn't a perfect style for you to be exampled.) no matter if you write it in script style or paragraph, line etc. (gosh! i hate my bad english!)

btw, you start to add a little problem and i hope it's going to be interesting i wonder what happen next when silver and blue meet each other. so, update soon, kagh. and it's not a serious story either.i suggest you more describe all the things (effect, setting, etc) in your writing (though mine isn't a perfect style for you to be exampled.) no matter if you write it in script style or paragraph, line etc. (gosh! i hate my bad english!)btw, you start to add a little problem and i hope it's going to be interesting i wonder what happen next when silver and blue meet each other. so, update soon, kay?

y?
illusionmage chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
It could be better. I suggest to not use script form. It looks sloppy. This isn't a flame! This story has potential. If you like, I could beta it.
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
All my fav character is in this fanfic

The story is good too
xxx chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Looks interesting. I would like to read the net chapter. :3