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![]() ![]() ![]() this fic has been added to my "all time favourites" list... absolutely love itthanks so much for sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect chapter... love it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was SO worth the burn to get to ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so... is Edward "playing the game" or is he really interested now ? ...mmmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a great story, i hope you will come back to us one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh we all knew he knew lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously Bella what the hell ? Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh these two are a tangled web of lies and deceit Very intriguing Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Obviously this plot was taken from THE PROPOSAL, but you made it your own. And, damn I loved this Edward. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favourites I can read over and over again. I love the little ways you describe Bella and Edward’s admiration for one anotherswoon-worthy! However, some of your word choices in this chapter when describing the people at the reservation (and a handful of instances prior for different purposes) is very, very questionable and you might want to be careful with that, regardless if you’re trying to convey that it’s just the characters who are thinking like that or not… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wth? “Nature loving freaks”? “Dirty ears”? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So close to maintaining a shred of dignity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Back in the red, sigh. |