|Reviews for Porcelain Heart|
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
it was great and written well the only problem i had was the fact that king Henry expressed no guilt or sadness whatsoever about the death of Anne on a personal level.
| Louise Foxhall chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Hi there :) I thought I would indeed take a look at this story as requested because it is hard to get reviews on such a small fandom sometimes. I do appreaciate that you had to change the timeline for this to work so it was slightly AU - which with a historical thing is slightly weird - but I enjoyed it all the same. There were a few typo errors but that didn't matter because for the most part your characterisation was very good, although I would like to have seen Anne a little stronger in the situation. Henry too, I thought was captured well (Although would he have seen this as an excuse to rid himself of her instead? I don't know). Anyway, Anne Boleyn was by far his best queen and I thought you did her justice in this :)
(Would it be possible for you to return the favour and read my Tudors fics because I am always looking for comments. Thanks.)
| obsessivefanno.4 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
ohh so sweet!
| MissDaniWhatsHerName chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
AHHHHH! My brain doesn't know what to say first!
I love how you captured the air of ancient times in your writing. I could see a vivid picture of what they all looked like in their fancy dresses and rolled up hair. XD
Description was also very awesome; I totally pictured every setting!
Awww, Elizabeth is so cute. :3 "Fishy!" :D I can see the childish smile lighting up her face.
WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE! But such a good plot and such a good idea! Loved every bit of it!
Looking forward to more writing, Missy! :D
| MajoringinFandoms chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
I love that. So many people ruin Elizabeth's future with a son... This was sad, but I loved it.
| Melody Anna Kamiya Tudor chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
so sad but I liked it
| lovetvtoomuchxo chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
this was a well written story
yes l was sad that you made her dye but its your story so its to the authors discreation...
either great story and keep them coming...
| he-be-forgot chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
This was amazing! I think Anne dying gave a great affect to the story and you should continue
| Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
This was a wonderful story! I was blown away by how much of the show you captured while still giving everything an original feeling and drawing us in completely. I loved how you brought Madge's personality into the story and showed why Anne needs her friendship. I loved how Anne stands up for herself, yet she's not afraid to cry. You have such an incredible talent!
Here are a couple of minor suggestions. I love the opening sentence, but "quickly shuffled" makes Anne sound clumsy and sort of awkward. Why not just say she "hurried" that sounds more graceful and ladylike. Also recheck the spot where you wrote "should" instead of shoulder.
All in all a great story!
| Pale Treasures chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Hi! This story was nothing like I expected it to be at first, but that's a good thing! I like you how entwined the events of the show with your story and made it all make sense. Poor Anne, I really felt for her here. Elizabeth, however, was a sweetie! And aww, the ending really surprised me. I'm so sorry that Anne died and left her daughter behind, but at least, that also ended her suffering and spared her the uncertainty of what was going to happen in the future. Still, I think she deserved better after everything, but that didn't dim my enjoyment of the story. It had some smart twists!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story and I agree, there's so much potential for more, I'm just uncertain about where to take some things and how I'd end the story. I'd need someone who's really good at History to guide me, lol! It also wasn't in my plans to write a multi-chaptered story now, as I'm already working on others, but I'll think about writing more. ;) Thanks again!
| cruelangel101 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This was an interesting rearrangement of scenes from the show to create a new story. I liked the ending of Anne's death (coming from a big Anne fan), simply because it was tragic but in a way it saved Elizabeth. Loved the ending of Elizabeth will be Queen because I am an even bigger Elizabeth fan.
I feel that you have something to write a full out story. Many things could be explored. For example, why did Henry suddenly wish to make Elizabeth the greatest monarch in English history. I can see that happening, but the change in Henry was rather sudden as this is a one chapter story. Anne's death is surely tragic to Henry and it will help save Elizabeth's position, but Henry is obsessed with a son, and he was alive so he would likely expect to marry soon (its only 1528 so he has plenty of time) and get a son from someone else. So his mentality to reach the ending conclusion could be explored. Maybe interactions with Elizabeth, to show that Elizabeth is intelligent and making him realize she can be capable or something.
You could also write on what other felt about it. Like how Mary felt (probably happy). What about Katherine of Aragon (seeing as it is around 1528-1529 so she is still alive)? What is going to happen to Jane Seymour? Cromwell's plans for the future? Seymours plots? So many other things.
Essentially, you could write at least a few more chapters if you don't want a full length story (or I guess you could just expand this chapter a little longer to satisfy our, the readers', curiosity, lol)
This was an enjoyable read, and I hope you write more soon, whether for this story or another Tudor story!
| Frog1 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Good story, but you left everyone with a cliffhanger. Will the King make Elizabeth the greatest Queen ever, or go back to he's selfish wish for a Prince? What about Mary, he's daugheter and her reaction on her stepmother's death?
| QueenBee10 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011