Reviews for Rain
Supasoph chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Another good rainin romp would be if Helena had run outside naked and came in dripping wet as Myka woke up and ravaged Helena senceless
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
It should rain more often!
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
MMmm! This is super saucy and I like it.

The rain is a really wonderful construction to use in this scene.

Your sex scene is very original; I like how versatile it is, as in, not following a 'connect the dots' step-by-step guide to sex writing :D
Willow008 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
HOT!
Psyhagde chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Read this elsewhere,fine sensual descriptions.