Reviews for Buffarmed Diaries
Nixia chapter 21 . 12/10/2014
Love this story! Hope you haven't forgotten about it. (
goddragonking chapter 21 . 7/18/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
goddragonking chapter 20 . 6/2/2014
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
goddragonking chapter 6 . 4/29/2014
great chapter , Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon
Marissa chapter 19 . 4/11/2014
When will you update ?!
Marissa chapter 19 . 4/2/2014
Update ! What does Spencer look like ? I love it ! You are awesome writer !
Akasha Hallows28 chapter 19 . 2/15/2014
love it keep going
goddragonking chapter 19 . 1/9/2014
great ch and hope for more updates soon
Tweeky chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
It looks like the way Zora is nervous when he orbed was because of Spencer's mentally unhinged killings of those people when she her magic and given the way she lost control it sounds like she's unwittingly used "Expression". He has a good point about the reason for taking the class (Who knows Willow might be there too:)) and she does need to learn to control her use of magic otherwise she'll be a loose-canon.

The language in question should be Bulgarian as this fic involves Katherine but she does does have a good point as there'd be little demand for Bulgarian in San Franscisco.

Oz has made much of an initial impression on her but then he is rather laconic type. It's good she's made some friends. Anyway she's sensed Katherine's covert stalking of her and using her powers sensed Katherine's feelings which clearly surprised as that's not one would expect from such a situation. Oz must've thought she'd zoned out and it's good that she liked Buffy and company as friends as she comes across as being a bit of a loner.

Katherine doesn't seem to think much of spencer's new friends but then she doesn't know them and of course she's going to be weary of a slayer. While she's understandably weary, even hostile, to Oz her reactions to him are, again, unwarranted.

As for her compelling David to watch out for Oz and basically kill him if he looks at Spencer the wrong way is, in the long term, just going to cause serious problems for both her and Spence and also Buffy, Willow and Oz. I think this will ultimately backfire and possibly have serious repercussions.
goddragonking chapter 18 . 11/18/2013
great ch and hope for more updates soon
Guest chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
They figured out it was Katherine way to quickly to be realistic
goddragonking chapter 10 . 8/26/2013
great ch and hope for more updates
Tweeky chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
I nice chapter but it really does need to be fleshed and yes Oz should not only stay in the story he should stay with Willow as those two make a good couple and i'd rather much prefer that Willow and Tara just be friends (Tara's relationship with Willow ultimately got her killed when that jerk Warren went on his anti-Buffy rampage).
Tweeky chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Firstly, this is a much better chpter two than the original as it is fleshed out somewhat more, anyway it's a nice introduction of Spencer to Buffy and Willow and I liked the observation how Leo was the only one not puffing after lugging Spencer's luggage to her dorm-room:). I see that she has noticed Katherine and has a vague recollection of her however:

"The relationship between the Halliwell sisters and their father was a complicated to say the least"

You need to change that sentence by removing the "a" so it says:

"The relationship between the Halliwell sisters and their father was complicated to say the least"

or change it so it says:

"The relationship between the Halliwell sisters and their father was a complicated man to say the least"

As for reluctance at accepting her Dad's money she should check her pride at the dorm's front-door as going to university can be very expensive and the text-books are often quite expensive.

Aside from Katherine's romantic interest in Spencer being OOC (Katherine is quite the maneater) i'm wondering if and when any of the other TVD characters will make an appearance.

Now:

"The man heard her growl and turned around to look at her."

Unless Katherine stopped, running the man at vampire-speed would seriously injure if not kill him.

And this should be rewritten:

"In a matter of seconds the man stopped fighting and his blood stopped flowing."

Should instead be something like:

"In about half-a-minute the man stopped fighting and his blood stopped flowing."

As even with a lacerated/transected carotid artery it still takes a short time for someone to fatally bleed out (Around 30 seconds for brain-death to occur) and lacerating/severing the neck's blood vessels (Especially the Carotid artery) is going to make a big mess. The blood in a carotid artery is under such high blood-pressure it should out to about 8Ft.

Otherwise a good chapter.
Tweeky chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
An interesting start to this fic and it'll be fun to see how they get on in Sunnydale.
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