Reviews for Yakuza
nickybluejess chapter 7 . 12/4/2011
Wow this chapter was really good. I liked how Usagi and Mamoru went into each others face, it was funny just imagening it. Now that Mamoru has some competition with Seyia, its going to be interesting who will get Usagi.

Can't wait for the next update. _
Alexis Blake chapter 7 . 12/4/2011
Pleaseeeeeee update soon. This story is getting sooo good!
Wonderwomanbatmanfan chapter 7 . 12/4/2011
MAN THIS IS REALLY GOTTEN GOOD LOL! Please update soon :D
love7peace5happiness100 chapter 7 . 12/4/2011
oh i love this story so much drama i like how you brought seyia into this please update soon please!
Katlin Grace chapter 6 . 11/28/2011
Love it. Keep them coming. I like how the generals were teasing Mamoru about being happy. Also liked the gun and car chase scene.
dori-tori chapter 6 . 11/28/2011
omigosh omigosh omigosh!

absolutely cant wait to find out bout usagi! and mamoru knows!

will be here for the next update.

xx dori-tori
unlockurdestiny chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
Well everyone has some kind of secret to hide huh. Good chapter just one thing, i felt like you shouldn't have said what you said in the beginning about reading the worst SM fanfic ever. It was uncalled for and people may take offense. Not everyone has the ability to write amazing stories but at least they tried.. who knows maybe some people who feel they can't write are reading your stories and by saying such crude remarks it makes them feel intimidated to write. Not really scolding you or anything but i'm just saying be careful about what you're saying here. I personally feel like this site is a friendly place for people to write freely and to learn/build their own writing skills regardless of how bad they are.. So yeah, just saying.. :P
CharmedSerenity3 chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
Can not hear wait to hear this story. Update soon!
Hamunaptra chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
Loved it 3 so intriguing! Just remember to put commas in lists can't wait for the next update!
midnightblue08 chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
usagi is mamoru's uncle's daughter?

that means they are cousins?
serenityendy chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
Aww suspense ... We want more :) love this chapter the most...pls update soon and I cant wait
roswellachick chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
"Yeah well it's not to funny, she really fucking hates me." "So do we." Jadeite smirked. "Well guess that makes two things she has in common with you." "What's the other?" Jadeite asked confused. "She's scared shitless of me too. Now shut up. And Kunzite, drive a little faster huh.-

"Damn, Mamoru. No offense but I like Usagi being around... she makes things fun!" -LOL

"Aw, sorry honey but that bunny took you to dreamland today." She smacked him hard.-on a roll

and the plot thickens jiji
Cosmic-lover chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Oh another very exciting chapter! I have to say Usagi is having quite an adventurous, not to mention emotional, time trying to escape Mamoru's 'evil' clutches lol nothing quite like a gun fight and car chase to bring people closer together huh? But I'm glad that she didn't get away although it sucks the way that Mamoru got her back, I mean I'd be shaken up too! I'm surprised she didn't break down sooner ' I loved the small fluff between the two of them. And I once more enjoyed Mamoru's passionate anger eeekk makes him sooo very smexy *grins* I'm wondering though what type of lies Usagi is hiding away from her ex lover, I'm very curious to find that one out :) The umm 'conversation' between everyone was very amusing! Especially the argueing *snickers* and you've give such a cruel cliffie, meanest one yet in fact *sigh* now I have to wait to find out what this big secret is... well I hope you update again soon XD
angel313 chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
That was cool and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Jenbunny chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
loved it
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