THIS FOC MAY BE OVER A DECADE OLD BUT ITLL BE IN MY HEART FOR AT LEAST A DECADE MORE333 much love

A good story overall. A bad beginning loses you points but it's worth a 7/10 at least.

Well, the story did become sensible at least. So good job, author.

So, even if we accept he doesn't just ask Batman for whatever reason, Jason watched the mountain for however many days but it never occurred him to look up what's up with Bruce Wayne? Or the strange teens with weird powers he's seeing? This Jason seems like he's from a universe without a JL, not even familiar with Superman if his thoughts on Superboy is any indication. It makes no sense whatsoever that a supposedly Batman-trained kid would jump in half cocked with no research at all.

This is quite a badly thought out concept, author. You should've rewritten these chapters to make more sense. Even if your story becomes sensible after the obligatorily stupid hero meeting fight, this start will leave the whole thing stained.

Jason is an idiot if he wanted to know who the new Robin was he just needed to look if Bruce had a new ward

I love cross dimensional and time traveling fics so HOW DID I MISS THIS ONE! Happy birthday to me! I'm a huge Dick fan and only have a little bit of Jason mostly from other fics as I am more the cartoons/movies then the comics but knew the basics and I love how you included the 'knowing the team' vs. 'never worked with them at all' thing and I see it as a possible reason Jason didn't make it cause thinking about it, if he knew Flash or Superman with ANY sort of cooperation, he'd have called them to get to Jason like he did when Robin went MIA. Now to go have dinner and eat cake. :) (Only small thing, autocorrect bit you a few times, if you wanna go through and get those. I'll likely reread when I cycle through my fandoms again and I'll send you any I catch, I was in a rush to finish ;) )

oof don't lieeee

Omg I almost cried with Jason's feelings about his 'home', and the differences between there and the place he is now, with Bruce worrying about him and people not holding ressentment of him. Hope Jay finds a way to work things out in his reality or accept this chance to have a new beginning in a new place

Great Jason redemption! :' )

What a read! It was very gratifying to see the joker murdered (THANK YOU AND F*CK YOU D.C FOR ALWAYS HAVING HIM LIVE) by his own hand, and for Jason to have some sort of closure/relationship mending with his own Bruce without it being him unrealistically giving him all of his characteristics. I also died imagining Artemis trying to flirt with Jason a la Artemis with Conner in season 1.

And I felt like the epilogue was also very well done, down to the last line. This was definitely worth staying up to read :)

Not gonna cry. Not gonna cry. NOT GONNA CRY! AGHHHHHHH! I love this story. It is most certainly going on my favs list. I mean, this is absolutely epic, well written, and in character.

i just wanted to say how much i utterly loved this. i couldnt stop reading and i do regret that since i was so into it i forgot to comment along the wayyoull probably never see this, but thank you and i hope youre doing good in life. x

im crying so hard that i cant bring myself to read the final chapter. its currently 6:12am and i have to be up in three hours ejrkdcjkddkd

This must be my tenth or a thousandth rereading of this fic, across both and ao3, and it’s still jist as good and cathartic every time. I LOVE ITTTTT

I read this twice and enjoyed it both times. It really feels like a reasonable continuation of the movie. You've captured Jason's struggle and eventual closure really well, and there's a lot of heart in every chapter.

Thank you for writing this.