|Reviews for Another Generic PROTOTYPE Fanfic|
| RejectedByMostButLovedByAll chapter 2 . 4/23/2011
im sorry charlie... i cant read this anymore... its really good and ur other fans will probably love it but i cant get into it coz i dont know the characters... and i cbs watching that thingy on youtube... but keep on writing and change the title to chicken soup! XD
| Ducks R Evil chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
hiya charles! first of all, i thought your favourite song would be New Divide from Transformers (profile). second, you should probably put Australia next to Asian (also from your profile).
i would probably say your story is good if i knew the characters and all, but i don't
can't wait to see you again!
| RejectedByMostButLovedByAll chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Nawwies! So cute! I have no idea who these people are but youre an awesome writer charlie! dont kill me for calling u that! XD i dunno what tips i can give u coz im a crap writer but... PUT YAOI IN IT! jk... i already mentally scarred u enough... XD I think it'd be good if the fic ended there... maybe... oh well... ! listen to other people's suggestions and follow what they say! luv u! XD RBMBLBAX XD [thats my pen name shortened] XD