Reviews for Arming Pasadena
Bec chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
This is awesome :-D
Dee chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Great start. Straight into action. I enjoyed the interactions between the main characters. I also liked the mouse.

I look forward to reading more!

Thanks
Riskreader chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Hmmm.. an interesting who done it to be sure, the whole story shifts into high gear and hits the ground running. :D
Mya chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This is off to a great start so far. Nice pacing. The pet mouse was a nice touch.

And this,

"She's a machine, she doesn't need to blink. You lose,"

had me laughing out loud.
peanut goddess chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This is wonderful. I like the pace and the quirks and your writing is mouse is a great addition, it really acts as a lens into Cameron's cpu in this chapter! Really looking forward to the next installment. insights into future john are spot on.
NinjaDriver chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I liked your style of writing! I like this story! :) hope to see an update soon!
olischulu chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Very nice so far.
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