Reviews for Arming Pasadena
mrswoman chapter 3 . 4/23/2011
Sorry it's taken me 3 chapters to call in and say well done and thanks for writing and posting this story... better late than sorry!

Well done with this story, like your writing style and your depiction of the team, especially, of course, Sarah and Cameron.

Looking forward to more :)
Riskreader chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
Well I think I'm beinging to gain a wary respect for the connor method of landing in trouble. The other is being his usual self. :D ie: when in doubt it's metal
Bec chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
This is awesome :-D
Dee chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Great start. Straight into action. I enjoyed the interactions between the main characters. I also liked the mouse.

I look forward to reading more!

Riskreader chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Hmmm.. an interesting who done it to be sure, the whole story shifts into high gear and hits the ground running. :D
Mya chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This is off to a great start so far. Nice pacing. The pet mouse was a nice touch.

And this,

"She's a machine, she doesn't need to blink. You lose,"

had me laughing out loud.
peanut goddess chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This is wonderful. I like the pace and the quirks and your writing is mouse is a great addition, it really acts as a lens into Cameron's cpu in this chapter! Really looking forward to the next installment. insights into future john are spot on.
NinjaDriver chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I liked your style of writing! I like this story! :) hope to see an update soon!
olischulu chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Very nice so far.
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