Reviews for The Essay
s.w.e.e.t.s.t.o.r.y.s.4.e.v.a chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Even your shortest storys are insperational, actully amazing :')!
grace1979 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
This was a really great story even if you didn't think so. I enjoyed reading it, you are a brilliant writer and I know sometimes it feels like its not that great but that is what us readers are here for to make sure you know that it was a great read!
sister lizzy chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Wonderful OS! I was so glad to see this finally posted so that I could see which story was yours. This is the one that I voted for too:) You did a great job, as usual.
gemma loves edward chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
That was a really good one shot :) It bought tears to my eyes love gem
Euphoria9 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I totally disagree with your self assessment of this story.

I think it is in one word "Perfect".

It truly touched my heart.
pleaseletmeoffthissite chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This is an awesome story. The challenge is awesome and the fact that you excepted the challenge is the most awesome of all three.
muzaklover chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
That was good!
k8ln713 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
awww... it was really good. i really liked it and started tearing up a bit.
astonmartin823 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
You greatly underestimate your writing skills..I liked it..tied in the origin and the meaning into a story that people can relate to..*hug* Good job (in 30 minutes) *smirks*
mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
awww! good job!
my4Queens chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
You did a good job. I enjoyed it and it was very sweet. Thanks for sharing.


NixDucky chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Oh, its a nice story! Really. Simple but sweet, & I had a smile on my face as I ended it which doesnt always happen. Good job ;)
Readable chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
You always know how to pull on the heart strings! - for a story you claim to be "not that great" I thought it was lovely :)

Thank you!
DaniGail chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
That was amazing. Short but powerful. Thanks
BeatrizBeltran chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Love it