Reviews for Hybrid
Zoommerfish chapter 2 . 8/29/2014
go on and please describe the hybrid some more you could also use the xenomorphs point of view on the previous events
SouzouWriter chapter 2 . 4/4/2012
I feel like one of those little fish that keeps biting at the bait.

So far, I do like the story. I hope more comes soon!
Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
nice start. cant wait for her to meet the yautja.
henxu chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Nice, I like this. Keep up the good work.
Khalthar chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
Confucious say... short chapter get short review.

On the otherhand, you seem like you might have a decent premise here, so now I think it's time that you did something with it. Your chapter length is extremely disappointing. I personally like to write chapters in a length of 5,000 words or more. I do have some chapters with a total size of over 20k words. That being said, I have PARAGRAPHS longer than both of your chapters! Here's a challenge for you Slick, let's see the next chapter hit 5,000 words or more. THEN I can actually SAY something about this story. Until then, there really isn't anything to go on.
ida-criss-wild chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
nice!
GrayHuntress chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
That's not a story, that's a paragraph. If you want a review - write a chapter.
Epic Banana chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Keep up with the idea you have. I'm interested, but would like to see a longer chapter.
Khalthar chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
There's not really enough here to comment on, just yet. Let me see another ten thousand words or so, and I can let you know how it look then. In the mean time. I'll keep an eye on this to see what you do with it.