|Reviews for Biscuits & Cookies|
| lowi chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Oh my goodness. Why have I missed this, as well?
Charlitrix is just ahsjdjaghjsdk and this was so AWESOME okay. &hearts
I loved how you wrote this, the bisquit thing and THE ENDING.
| FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I actually quite like this pair. they fit together perfectly, in some weird sort of way. loved the way you wrote their bit of banter. I also think you did a great job writing Bellatrix in character while making her a little soft around the edges
| Morghen chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
As much as I love Charliephina, I will always have a soft spot for Charlitrix!
It was weird to see a more human side of Bella, but not weird in a bad way. I think that I just get so used to thinking of her as a crazy killer and it's hard to remember that she must have had some sort of "softer" side. I think you did a really good job showing that side of her. The way she interacted with Charlie was perfect. It showed how she cared for him, but she was still very in character.
And Charlie... *le sigh* He is so yummy! As usual, you wrote him perfectly! I liked how he knew about Bellatrix's bad side(like how she got those cookies), but was still able to look at her and think of her as another human.
THE ENDING WAS SOOOO GOOD! I just adore the idea of her being pregnant!
*cough* write more with Charlitrix and Catrin! *cough*
| combeferring chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Ella approves. Ella approves very much ;)
Ella is also going to leave her review in the third person as she's feeling contrary today.
Anyway, Ella loves Charlie very much and would rather like to give him a biiiiiig hug because he's just about the sweetest thing. She is also fond of Bella and laaaaikes her being so crazy. She also enjoyed her killing the dude but that might just be Ella being odd.
Ella was also very pleased to hear the mention of Catrin at the end as Catrin is Ella's favourite OC (even though Ella is debating changing her name but that's a different story).
So, Ella would like to thank mewchie very much for this as Ella enjoyed it greatly. And has mewchie learnt not to bet against Ella again? :p
| macdennischardee chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I liked! :)
Awe, I love Charlie. He is sweet.
You wrote Bella well. I liked it. ;)
Preggo! Woo! XD