Reviews for The Unexpected
SexyBelle chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I'm confused
SexyBelle chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
loved it
SexyBelle chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
funny
alsin chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT D

and congratualtions about your twins )

also YAY for over-protective Edward
tff000 chapter 4 . 8/19/2011
glad you're back
tff000 chapter 3 . 5/28/2011
loving jane in this. e doesn't seem so swift as a body guard. wondering who is at the door. absolutely no idea.
ShamelesslyObsessed chapter 3 . 5/20/2011
So I see you showing Ed's human side, which is good, but it makes me even more wary of when he will roofie her and knock her up.
Mrs.Jensen chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
Dont stop now!
alsin chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
OH OH OH

UPDATE PLEASE

I really love your story :)

the first chapter makes me really sad though
Christina Fey chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
And here I was expecting Alice. What on Earth, girl!

Jessi
melissamary55 chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
really good update soon
cinnyshy chapter 2 . 4/29/2011
So Eddie, is going to be her bodyguard? O this outta be good. So does ge actually kidnap, rape her, or us she going to get it from someone else? Why is James, staying at Em's house? Doesn't he have a house of his own? I'm glad that your making him a good guy, instead of an asshole, like so many do. It'll be a nice change.
SweetiePieSaysHi chapter 2 . 4/29/2011
Love it
melissamary55 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
really good prologue continoue it sounds like a really good story
Christina Fey chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Hmm... Interesting start here, chica. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Jessi
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