Reviews for Keys to the Heart
HCVquizibo chapter 7 . 8/31/2014
The going to be honest about this the keyblade was where I stopped reading.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 58 . 7/11/2014
I knew that Mister Armor had to be Ikuto! Although, the fact that you originally didn't plan it as such just confuses me.
Lazruth chapter 58 . 7/11/2014
Eh, to be fair, already guessed that the armored guy was actually Ikuto, even before the whole time displacement thing was brought up in this story. Ah well. Another great chapter, gonna wait (im)patiently for the next one!
FateBurn chapter 58 . 7/11/2014
Great like always, although a little slow, but not bad just that it was a filler chapter.
Ender chapter 57 . 6/24/2014
Hmmm... I hope Ikuto apologize to the Kappas in the future, as we don't want him have a bad first impression to them. If he manages to get away with it after that little incident means he's almost a borderline Marty Stu. He's clearly trespassing their territory even tough he unintentionally went trough there.
Bob chapter 40 . 6/19/2014
Ikuto's an idiot. And so are you
Detinc chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
I think a better name for Future Gazer would be Clairvoyant Gaze, at least that's my opinion. Meh, it's your keyblade...
darkdopple chapter 57 . 6/11/2014
I just caught up with this one and man I'm sad I didn't find it earlier. It's really good. I was dreading getting closing to the current chapter because then I wouldn't have anymore to read. I wish found this before you took out the x chapters too since it seems that you include quite a bit of story in them that catch me off guard when I have to skip it to read the chapter after it. Keep it up and I hope you update this soon.
FateBurn chapter 57 . 5/26/2014
Good to see you update this great story again please continue again soon.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 57 . 5/20/2014
I still wonder if mister black armor is Ikuto. I mean, it wouldn't be unreasonable for him to help in the fight with EX Rumia in that case, and it would explain why the armored guy at Myouren Temple chased him off, and was stronger than him, if memory serves. Of course, that seems like the obvious conclusion. But time travel stories can be a load of fun to mess with in such a way! "You mean I was that jerk all along?!" Would be funny to see the look on his face, at least.
MUS3 chapter 57 . 5/18/2014
He's back! I woke up this morning with a terrible hangover and seeing a new chapter of this fic posted instantly cured it. Might have do some chapter rereading to refamiliarize with Ikuto's storyline.
Lazruth chapter 57 . 5/17/2014
Oh my hells YOU'RE BACK! *Throws a crazy-ass party* Let the good times roll once more!

...Oh, that reminds me. I know you put the X-chapters up on , but will you be putting a notice up in this story whenever a new one is available?
Hahnemann chapter 31 . 5/15/2014
Really good, enjoying everything thus far. Ikuto is a little over the average weird in my opinion, making his course of actions to be quite logical, to me. But being strange is something we all have, however some of us can show it freely and others keep it in their own heads. Still, we're all unique, have to congratulate you on creating such an interesting character.
Johan Liebheart chapter 8 . 5/14/2014
Great, really. The story caught from the first chapter, every moment was intersesting and sometimes funny. You did fine in many things about your OC, I say many things beacuse there were some mistakes (or so that's waht I think).
Notice that I've inly read until the seven chapter.

When your OC (himselft named Ikuto) comes to Gensokyo, he acted in a way that until this chapter still has no sense. First, if you were by some manner transported to a totally different place or world wothout advice, how would you feel? Even if that place is Gensokyo, you'd be very impressed, right? So why was Ikuto acting so carefree about the idea of being there (not exactly, I ope you understand me), wasn't he worried of his life in his own world?...

Yukari told him he could stay there, wherever he wanted to, nut Ikuto took it like if it were a matter of everyday. He nkew enough of Touhou to be really shocked to meey those characters in person, despite that... Why was him acting cool and calm? Then, the plot of the story weent very fine, what where happening in his life in Hakugyokurou was enjoyable. All until te fight against the Youkai. The opinions about this one can vary. According to the explanations you placed, a Youkai has a strength that exceeds the humans', Ikuto could almost beat one, however why was he acting calm? When in at least a month ago he was living a normal life.

True, three-five weeks in Gensokyo can change a person's behavior, but he keeps being a human that has only been training those three-five weeks, it'd be difficult to him to have knowledge against super-human opponents. Better you should have done anything like Ikuto running (or beating) of the Youkai and escaping by some form, a lucky form. If you winder, I taking at count that Ikuto already had combat training, but that's not enough.

The keybade was introduced to the story in a bad way, from nowhere he received a key from Yukari, it could be better (forgive me, that's inexplicable, right. Perhaps I only would preferred a most original situation).
And so it's the same with the second fight. Youmu has benn treating a lot of combats in Gensokyo, many kinds against Youkais and other magic and powerful characters. Don't you think it's inexplicable to her to have problems fighting with a human like Ikuto, even if he had two months training? Youmu had a lot of more time of experience. That has no sense as the behavior of the boy does. Mmm... I admit that I didn't comprehended very well that fight, English grammar that needs to be fixed.

And the last point, this is just an opinion that you can ignore completly. Believe it, many fanfictions does the same, and is inevitable; inexplicable ways to act of the characters just for the fanservice and senseless situations; truly, you don't need to do that. There are a lots of that ones here. If you're going to do a harem avoid fast advances of Ikuto in his realationships, make them have sense, explain what brought them to feel like that and not unexpected and plain hugs for nothing. Just think on it, no one falls in love so easy, maybe not everyone, there are better ways.

You've read many other fanfics, haven't you noticed it's typical perfect, awesome and/or cool OCs? Autors unconsciously forgetting how is to be on heir shoes, focusing more in making them look better than other characters, detracting what they are and can do? The perfection in this kind of characters is very common, the impefection can be more interesting than that.
Yes, it's likely everything in a novel, if you give "why's" there will be "a because" for "consequences". A well done and deep "why" transfers a good feeling for the plot fo the story.

I don't know if you fixed all or some of this problems in the next chapters, I hope so. But if you haven0t, you can do it in your next fanfiction or consecutive chapter. Don't take me wrong, I like your story and what I've seen until now.
Hahnemann chapter 8 . 5/7/2014
Awesome story so far I just love how you depicted every single detail. But seriously though... What the fuck! A part of me is literally dying for not being able to witness the beautiful result of a bond made between those who love each other! It felt like after I enjoyed all those emotional, hurt/comfort and romantic scenes, I got slapped like a fucking bitch the moment I read they all got taken down.

Now I don't blame you one bit, in fact, you did it to ensure the survival of this story, so I deeply appreciate it.

But alas if there are fucking cunts to fucking blame they all got taken down are those cock sucker mother fucking snitchers who apparently will dick slap in whatever way possible people who go about there daily business making others content with a great story while those cunts can only produce the stinking shit their dim nasty мудак make, bastards go rot in the mother fucking garbage in the fucking dark alleyway next to mother cunts who will rape the shit out of your shitty guy vagina's until you fucking rot from the inside out like the little shits you are! Go report this shit you little squealing bitches as I watch the flying fuck I don't give while I plow your mother! Apparently that's all you are good for in the FF community.

Now... fyuff... that's off my chest, sorry really like your story and ire is not good inside. Anyhow, thanks for the story, make sure not to keep us waiting and hope you get your motivation back :) If you smiled give me a Like :P Wish that existed here..
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