|Reviews for My Cure|
| Noneworking chapter 9 . 8/28/2012
You are building an amazing story, BF! MORE! POOF!
| Noneworking chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
I would eat Snape and the porsche for dessert in this chapter. I would write more, but POOF off to my next chappy!
| Noneworking chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Heh, the slow development of needing each other, at first just to keep the loneliness away...So the dance begins!
| Noneworking chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
Ooooooo Great story building in this chapter, hints and foreshadows every place!
| Noneworking chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
This gives me the warm fuzzies. I love the caring nature in Snape, and the realistic way you portray Hermione...she is suffering, but still strong enough to try to be normal...very realistic.
| Noneworking chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
ERMAHGERD! Perfect! If I had to guess, she has PTSD or Panic attacks...if that is what you are setting u here you got it spot freaking on! Great development!
| Noneworking chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Yes, I am a comment idiot and think I need to mark each chapter. Again, this is the best story development I've seen. No bi-polar Hermione the bitch shrew, or manic Snape...good characterization!
| Noneworking chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
This is probably one of the more original scenarios I've seen in a HP fan fiction featuring SS/HG right out of the gate. I may be a newbie to writing FF, but I'm no newb to reading it, i've been reading them for ages and this sticks out as one of the best beginnings i've come across.
| Noneworking chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Oh and you are H/S...You may just be a perfect writer.
| chyaraskiss chapter 41 . 5/20/2012
I really enjoyed this fic. But one thing kept coming to mind. Why didn't they ever do magic? Seems a bit silly to not just use a 'talent'.
| Marianna Snape chapter 41 . 5/1/2012
I loved this :D imparticular the whole muggle storyline!
Can I marry Severus instead?
A sequel would have been great ;)
| Petite Mule chapter 16 . 4/22/2012
Hi! I enjoy your story thus far and I'm impatient to read it till the end. My english isn't up to par, but (maybe because?) I'm french and I hope this will help you :
- I would like a bottle of champagne, two glasses, and two chocolate crepes : Je voudrais une bouteille de champagne, deux flûtes et deux crêpes au chocolat.
You can use "coupes" instead of "flûtes" or "verres". Usually, a "coupe" or "coupette" mean a glass already full of champagne. A "crêpe de chocolat" means a crepe made of chocolate. A "crêpe au chocolat" means a crepe topped with chocolate.
- Can I get you anything else? : Souhaitez-vous autre chose ?
- Everything is fine, Thank You : Non, merci.
- How can I help you? : Vous avez besoin d'aide ?
- Do you have this in a 7? Les avez-vous en 38 ?
- These too : et celles-ci aussi (tambien is a spanish word)
- I would like to purchase both pairs of shoes please : nous prenons les deux paires s'il vous plaît (shoes are for her so he uses plural "us" and Frenchs would be more direct like "ok, let's take both").
I guess I'm not your first french reader, but I hope this would help. I would be glad to give you a little something for all the pleasure you give me with your story.
| myheartwanders chapter 41 . 3/28/2012
What a wonderful story! I love that they had all of that adventure without having to have it in the wizarding world! Brilliantly written!
I would love to see a sequel... maybe with their kids going into Hogwarts or something like that!
| kuklam chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
love this story
so sweet and make my heart feel so warm
thanks for writing this story
looking forward to story on HG & SS again~~~~
| JeniDRalph chapter 5 . 2/25/2012
Oooooh... grilling with Snape.