I’ve recently been reading your story and loving it! I tried to join your facebook group. Is it still active? I’m just curious. Thanks!

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us, I love your Bella and Edward.

love this story its shaping up to being amazing, just enough humor romance and mob activity to make it a literary marvel if this is the caliber of stuff u write change the names and u could sell this u would make a fortune

Whoa! How does she know?!

This story is so good! This is the first time I can remember reviewing on here but it’s also the first time in over a year that I stayed up until after 4am reading because I just couldn’t put it down.

Alice not talking and Rose being the shopaholic makes me chuckle!

Read the whole thing over the last couple of days and loved it! The way Edward treats Bella is swoony. I like how there was no relationship angst in it. I kept waiting for one of edwards past fucks (besides Tanya! Haha) to show up and try to cause shit, but I’m glad it didn’t happen. Generally I don’t like the manwhore virgin trope, but since it didn’t focus on that too much I was able to enjoy the story. Thanks for your writing!

20 girls by the age of 17?! Damn. I know mob life is different than, you know, real life. But that’s gross! And I guess I don’t understand why it doesn’t bug Bella more?
I mean, I guess with a mobster, things like sex, drugs, murder, etc. don’t mean as much to them as it does to… not criminals?
But I do wish that Bella hadn’t been a virgin. I’m pretty sure 1/2, if not more, Of the stories I read are virgin Bella and Edward with a sordid past. Not that I hate the trope, but it’s sooooo prevalent in the fandom.
I had slept with more men before I met my husband and he’s only been with me. I do love when I come across a Bella who hasn’t “saved” herself. Like, how could she have dated Mike for almost a whole school year and not even kissed him? Generally women are sexual creatures, too.

Such a dramatic entry for Edward! Love it

I am reading this for the 2nd time. I love the dialogue in this story. Best Edward ever! Thank you.

That was such a good story. I really loved this E and his Princess. She adapted so well to this life. And their love sustained them through the good, the bad and the scary times.

She needs to wake up and give up on Jake. PERIOD. He wont change and someone will be hurt and it could be your children or your soon to be husband..WAKE UP BELLA

Awesome story! Thanks for sharing.
I still would have liked to hear Jacob defend himself. It wasn’t clear how edward and Bella messed up Leah catching Edward in the act of killing Aro. I can only assume that Jake did
not know that Bella was going to be taken by Sam and Tanya when she didn’t go with him
so there was no reason to go to Aro’s apartment. That just leaves more questions. Sam didn’t
inform her through Emily that they took her? They all seemed to have their own agenda and
not all of them were clear. What was Sam’s problem? Tanya wanted Bella dead so she couldn’t
have been in on Leah’s plans. Not that we really know what was transpiring between her and Aro.
So many unanswered questions.
Not that the story wasn’t exciting because it was. Thank you. Looking forward to moving on to the sequel that I saw on The Lemonade Stand but had to come read this first.
I’m surprised I’ve never read this before.

I believe the elevator scene was after they came back from their honeymoon, at least 2 weeks after Aro was killed. Even if they tripped Bella up they might figure she knows more than she’s saying but doubt they have anything to charge her with. The police can lie to trip you up but they can’t just take you off the street because they want to have words with you, they should sue them all.

Awesome honeymoon. If someone wasn’t watching them on the deck then how did the music start playing when they started dancing?