Reviews for Blood Music
Elanordh chapter 11 . 6/26/2011
Oooh dear, ooh dear... That was intense! First I wanted to scream to Marla: "Take your hands out of this man!" ;)

And then all I could do was reading quicker and quicker.

It was great that you mentioned about Jane and his reluctance to be touched when he doesn't want it. I can only imagine that this intimate Marla's touch can be even worse, for a person like him.

And there was a moment that brought a smile to my face, in spite of the situation:

"So another new shirt bit the dust (...) The first version had gotten him drugged and hospitalized; now, it had gotten him drugged, kidnaped and . . . he didn't really want to think what may be next." Yes, know Jane's luck. :)

Yes, the Team to the rescue! Please, please don't make us waiting to long. Oh, the next chapter is really the last one? Must it be the last? :(
Anna chapter 11 . 6/26/2011
Amazing like always! This is my favorite story at the moment, so I still hope it is not going to end so soon. I am sure Jane has a lot of isues to work trough;) Please update really soon!
MissDonnie chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
wow...what a chapter that was...:) You are a great writer
CindyT63 chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
Wow - another breathless chapter! Hope the next one comes soon!
Anna chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
Very intense, I love it! Need more!
xXxBubbleHubxXx chapter 10 . 6/23/2011
Wow that was an awesome story I loved it to bits please I am begging you to write more you left me in total suspense once again loved it! D
MentalistLover chapter 10 . 6/23/2011
Loved it, as usual. Poor team! You did a great job of conveying each member's guilty feeling, keeping each one in-character. Poor Jane! To have this crazy woman touching him in such an intimate way has got to be doing a number on him. Not to mention seeing that powder sitting right there. Hopefully he can hang on until the team reaches him; just wondering what's going to happen to him until they do, tho!

Lyle: PLEASE stop hindering the work on this story! I'm asking very nicely...
CindyT63 chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Loved it. Loved it!
JaffaCake13 chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Intriguing... Quite interesting, but what happened at night with Marla and Jane... if anything. But yeh, generally a good chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing more soon :)
hecticlife chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Keep going - got to know what happens!
Aqua Mage chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
They're getting closer! Looking forward to more...
Elanordh chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Good, really good chapter. The different style for you, but the (great) writing skills the same, so reading it, was a natural thing.

There are many great moments, but one thing caught my attention, as another example of your subtle way of showing great emotions and care of one member of the team for the other. (And since Cho is my second favourite character... well... ;))

""We should've put a tracking device on him." said Cho, his voice not betraying the worry and dread that made him grip the steering wheel so tightly that his hands throbbed."

Friend may be in a grave danger. No other words are needed. Stoic and almost always composed Cho, yet his body language says it all.

Great writing again. I really, really can't wait for the next chapter. :)
xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Great chapter, I hope they find him soon! Just one little thing I can't help but point out... You spelt Teresa wrong throughout the chapter, there's no 'h' after the 'T' :)
MissDonnie chapter 10 . 6/21/2011
thanks for such great work...loved it
MentalistLover chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Ah ha! So that's why Cho wasn't there for our poor Jane. He and Rigsby are gonna feel SO bad about what happened. And L/VP, too, I imagine. Guilt all around. And damn that cheap equipment! I still wonder if anyone either saw/heard Jane's struggle with Marla or saw the van take off so quickly...

Poor, poor Jane. Marla is really creeping him out with her crazy rants and then "touching" him on top of that. What does she have in that drawer? I'm so worried for him! (but still very much loving the whole thing!) Please come back right now with the next chapter.
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