|Reviews for Blood Music|
| MissDonnie chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
wow...what a chapter that was...:) You are a great writer
| CindyT63 chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
Wow - another breathless chapter! Hope the next one comes soon!
| Anna chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
Very intense, I love it! Need more!
| xXxBubbleHubxXx chapter 10 . 6/23/2011
Wow that was an awesome story I loved it to bits please I am begging you to write more you left me in total suspense once again loved it! D
| MentalistLover chapter 10 . 6/23/2011
Loved it, as usual. Poor team! You did a great job of conveying each member's guilty feeling, keeping each one in-character. Poor Jane! To have this crazy woman touching him in such an intimate way has got to be doing a number on him. Not to mention seeing that powder sitting right there. Hopefully he can hang on until the team reaches him; just wondering what's going to happen to him until they do, tho!
Lyle: PLEASE stop hindering the work on this story! I'm asking very nicely...
| CindyT63 chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Loved it. Loved it!
| JaffaCake13 chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Intriguing... Quite interesting, but what happened at night with Marla and Jane... if anything. But yeh, generally a good chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing more soon :)
| hecticlife chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Keep going - got to know what happens!
| Aqua Mage chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
They're getting closer! Looking forward to more...
| Elanordh chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Good, really good chapter. The different style for you, but the (great) writing skills the same, so reading it, was a natural thing.
There are many great moments, but one thing caught my attention, as another example of your subtle way of showing great emotions and care of one member of the team for the other. (And since Cho is my second favourite character... well... ;))
""We should've put a tracking device on him." said Cho, his voice not betraying the worry and dread that made him grip the steering wheel so tightly that his hands throbbed."
Friend may be in a grave danger. No other words are needed. Stoic and almost always composed Cho, yet his body language says it all.
Great writing again. I really, really can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
Great chapter, I hope they find him soon! Just one little thing I can't help but point out... You spelt Teresa wrong throughout the chapter, there's no 'h' after the 'T' :)
| MissDonnie chapter 10 . 6/21/2011
thanks for such great work...loved it
| MentalistLover chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Ah ha! So that's why Cho wasn't there for our poor Jane. He and Rigsby are gonna feel SO bad about what happened. And L/VP, too, I imagine. Guilt all around. And damn that cheap equipment! I still wonder if anyone either saw/heard Jane's struggle with Marla or saw the van take off so quickly...
Poor, poor Jane. Marla is really creeping him out with her crazy rants and then "touching" him on top of that. What does she have in that drawer? I'm so worried for him! (but still very much loving the whole thing!) Please come back right now with the next chapter.
| MentalistLover chapter 8 . 6/20/2011
Oh Jane, why weren't you paying more attention to your little voice that said something was off about this woman? (His self-preservation skills need a lot of work) And I'm assuming Lisbon and Van Pelt just got delayed by the club crowd, but where oh where is Cho? He said he'd meet Jane outside! And he heard Jane say there was a weird vibe to this woman, so he should've been on top of this. Did he hear the struggle through Jane's mic? Any chance he or Lisbon at least SAW the van as it pulled away? Off to read the next chapter (thanking you and God that I don't have to wait for the next chapter...)
| JaffaCake13 chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Hi again :) Interesting twisty-turny thing... but poor Jane... He sounds so panicked... and there's nothing the team can do for him, because they were just too slow... :( Well, hopefully you'll update soon, but don't be toooooo cruel to Jane, it would break my heart... :'(