Reviews for Enjoying Dishes
WritersProse chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
It was a cute little story. I would have liked to have seen a bit more indepth interaction between the two main characters, but you can't really have everything. This is a fluffy one-shot, and works just as it is.

There were some grammar issues that I noticed, but they seemed more like typos. Perhaps proofreading the doc a few more times before publishing would help to add an extra sheen of polish.

Keep it up!
SavingtheGeneration chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This was written very well! It was also very cute! XD For some reason, Oswald embarrassed about eating alone is so adorable! XD Good job!
Senshi Of Sadness chapter 1 . 6/12/2011

Hehe, I thought a similar thing like this, probably 'cause I had the same, problem (not having the ingredients). I like this oneshot a lot. Short and cute.

See ya~
zecross chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
hoho... its funny if you think like that..hahaha,

anyway good story