Reviews for Breakfast, acronyms and brotherhood
Firelizard Tamer chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Awww... I've enjoyed reading this. Nice Bromance between these two so early on. Seeing how Loyal they are to each other so early on.
Rosenmaedchen chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I think it is great
PBIceCream chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This is just beautiful, and how I wish it could've been in the episode, thank you!
Louey06 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Good story! How cute, the two of them just chatting and being friends. I liked the acronym at the end, it is a bit of a mouthful though! nicely done, very enjoyable
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Great story. :D
Ecri chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This was a fun read. You've done a good job capturing the back-and-forth of Sherlock's and John's conversations. I love how you've built on some small moments from the episode and turned them into this. Well done. Keep writing.
JunebugXD chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
THIS IS PERFECT! Now whenever I re-watch that episode I just add this moment to the end, like it was meant to be there. SO GOOD! Nice work
Kokoroyume chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Nice one :)
CSI Haylz chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
A great fic :) I especially loved the latter part where John and Sherlock discussed the things that are normally unspoken. Sherlock is really sweet to John, and I love how you dealt with the whole 'friend or colleague' question. I think there were a few points were John and Sherlock were out of character and it was sometimes difficult for me to visualise them in that scenario, but then again it's not as if these issues have been dealt with on an actual episode of Sherlock and we simply don't know how they would react. Overall definitely an enjoyable read so thanks for sharing! :)
toeki chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
again, a nice, fluffy, feel-good story. it made me smile. well written.
LienaGrace chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I loved the adopted brother line and how they talked about the friend/colleague comment. And I liked how you had Sherlock take care of the ASBO situation, especially since the episode itself never showed how that was resolved. John noticing that he's the only one Sherlock genuinely smiles at was great too. The friendship between them really comes through very nicely here.
Linwe Elendil chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Beautifully done. And I love the adopted brother line. Thank you so much for getting it right!
JTZ chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This is great. And I like your other Sherlock story too. You write the friendship between these characters so well. Since this one is set after The Blind Banker and the other one after The Great Game, will you write one just after A Study in Pink too? That would be fun.
Tammy chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
This was so sweet. I love how you wrote John. He's such a good and kind person. I also love how you wrote Sherlock caring about his court date/ASBO and money problems. Their friendship came through very nicely. The mention of how Sherlock smiles differently for John was great too. It is more geniune. You can see it in the first episode after they finish chasing the cab and at the end with the joke about the killer. I especially liked how Sherlock thought of John as his adopted brother. It fits their relationship and how Sherlock became so attached to him very quickly.
PhantomInspector chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Awwww, this made me so warm and fuzzy inside by the end. I love stories like this that let Sherlock and John have their affectionate moments without it being slash. The last line made it so perfect. And yay for canon refs! :D Great piece here. I hope it gets more reviews.
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