Just rereading some of your old stories and this one just made me cry. Right here right now. You are a beautiful writer never give that up.

Ugh! I hated the way Mike manipulated Bella and Edward. Grrr! High school emotions suck, too. Well written outtakes. All three! Thank you for writing.

Wow this story was absolutely beautiful

So love this

Amazing chapter

Is so beautiful your story how you write the characters everithing is lovely and a truly placer hard to find

Hope he mans up!

Absolutely love the story had to read it twice because it was that good! Didn't like some parts like Edward's attitude in some of it or how Bella used his feelings for her against him to get what she wanted! I get she was indebted & engaged to Mike so why get upset when he was dating Victoria? Knowing his history with her fiance why try to put him in an uncomfortable situation & then be so weak as to let him make decisions for her? Also she should have told him about the job, they are spending all this time together, she knows he has feelings for her & yet she leads him on & runs from him... This Bella irritated the heck out of me she was a coward & naive enough to let Mike treat her that way! I was happy when Edward broke his nose! Glad they got their HEA they deserved it.

I just don't remember reading this before but how could I have missed it? Really liking this Bella.

Another good story. Thanks for sharing.

Love your stories, just found them, however I could find your new one thief of hearts? Did you do it, or no or was it pulled ?

Oh my God. Another good one! I feel so sad for these guys and all their angst. I know it's going to work out and I'm still heartbroken over it! You're awesome, as I've said before. I'm diving into the next one!

The last chapter - to put it simply - I love how you ended this.
The closure and sense of wonder reminds me of "A walk to remember"
Your writing is indeed beautiful :)

The epilogue - flawless.

Awww! nerdy Edward was so sweet but what he becomes later is all the more better. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this :)

great scene! I was furious reading lol