|Reviews for The Path We Once Walked|
| kilimnikveronika6 chapter 12 . 2/20
Please continue! I really love this story! I'm cheering you on! Good luck! Hope you have a great day! ️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️
| laurajustin chapter 12 . 9/10/2020
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
| Jinx chapter 12 . 3/26/2020
I think is great that you put the chapter name before actually posting a new chapter. Also, please update i just finished the chapter and i'm already sad!
PLEASE UPDATE! THANK YOU FOR HEARING ME OUT!
| Animeloverforever1127 chapter 3 . 9/15/2019
No you didn’t mess up
I loved the idea of shikamaru wiping the floor with Sasuke
| mous chapter 12 . 10/27/2018
Hi, don't ever use "snuck in a warm but slightly chapped kiss" again. What the hell, are they doing some kind of STD makeout?
Revolting. Your plot was fine, until you shit out that sappy "NOOO DON'T DIE OMG I LOVE YOU SMOOCHIES" crap. Cliche exists in all the bad writers' fanfiction.
Anyway, I read this for the other parts, since you seem to drop a cringe bomb every paragraph or so. But I guess it was ok otherwise.
| mos chapter 1 . 10/26/2018
Who the fuck would do shit like "[sneak] in a warm and slightly chapped kiss" ? The hell?
Sneaking kisses is one thing. Sneaking SLIGHTLY CHAPPED KISSES. That are WARM. What is wrong with you? That's revolting.
Warm kisses are fine. The entire issue is "slightly chapped"
Your phrasing fucking sucks. Maybe if you had said "sneaked in a warm kiss with slightly chapped lips" (even though the idea of slightly chapped is already disgusting) it would have been better.
Anyway, it was good but then you had to put in the stereotypical OMG HE'S DYING KISS OF LIFE-FU shit. That really was a huge turn off.
But it seems pretty good otherwise. Guess I'll keep reading, hope there's not as much damn cringe in this story.
| mice chapter 1 . 10/26/2018
Okay, the part about "slightly warm but chapped kiss" was revolting. But your story is good overall, aside from that disgusting bit.
Nice syntax, grammar; good plot line. Seems to be going well.
I hope nothing like that phrase shows up in future chapters because that turned me off so %!# bad...
| alicia7788 chapter 12 . 9/21/2018
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/15/2018
"Even Hinata was unshamed at refusing his offer" by running away first... But what if instead of running away, she screamed for Neji before running to him for protection against Gai's spandex? That will be so XD XD XD!
| nekolovesyou chapter 1 . 9/9/2018
It's like my 10th time reading this I love it
| Onedayinjune chapter 12 . 1/10/2018
Such a great story! Awesome writing I truly hope that you will update the story and I'll just abandon it because he was doing an awesome job!
| namisnakama chapter 12 . 12/18/2017
damn that was an emotional roller coaster. but I really enjoyed it! thanks!
| YokaiAngel chapter 12 . 11/26/2017
| Son san chapter 12 . 10/7/2017
| nekolovesyou chapter 1 . 5/30/2017