|Reviews for On the Edge of Reason|
| Meiji Emperor chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Oh Boy. Dont think Bella quite knew what was happening to her. Almost sounded like she was choking on some reception canapes Any one who was willing to marry a pale, pasty, skinny, cold, stone hard walking corpse just to get laid must be all kinds of desperate. Bella of course is still a few slices short of a pie, however this is much closer to the Jake that was starting to be realized in the books. Not the weak, simpering whiney fool willing to do anything just to have Bella glance in his general direction that many fics see him as..
| AngelisaBlack chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Damn wish I was on that stairway to heaven.
| WendyJH chapter 3 . 7/20/2011
Ahhh, such deliciousness on the stairs. Another HOT one! I absolutely loved that they couldn't make it up the stairs! Against the wall will not inflict any spinal injuries k, lol. But anywhere, ANYWHERE the talented and F'in HOT Jacob Black decides is a good place, then its a damn good one for me too. Dr Paul?, lol. I got a quick image of what the good Dr might like to wear with his Stethiscope *wink*, lol. Hey, can't help where the mind goes after what I just read.
Just one more thing, More PLEASE! Love ur drabbles.
Btw, totally agree with ur Author's note. I hope it got to all those that it was intended for. What goes around comes around is most def what everyone should keep in mind. Thanks for saying all that in such a cleverly way that I never would have been able to do. Immersion, Ha... Love it !
Keep creating and sharing Nara. Wouldn't be the same without Ur work! Hugs, Wendy ;)
| WendyJH chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Nara, that virgin sex was perfect! I love how they were both discovering as they went further and further. Thank goodness for Jake insisting on knowing what she was doing there. Her completely honest answer not only blew his mind, but solidified the possiblity of him allowing himself to just do what they both wanted and needed. the tension and connection in his kitchen was palpable. If he wouldnt' have dragged her to his room, they would have combusted out there.
You did a fantastic jbo with their first time. It was sexy, hot, sweet, tender, then alot more of the HOT. Got a kick out of his mental doubt of her possible ability to be a good mother and his fear of her running with his child. So relieved he doesnt have to worry about that. Her confession at the end was such a wonderful, happy relief. I feel estatic for both of them.
Hmmmm, now who could it possibly be there interupting their long awaited reunion huh ? Not cool, lol.
Loved the chpt ! And love ur writing Nara. U rock.
Off to read and review some more. Hugs, Wendy ;)
| WendyJH chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Oh my goodness, that was so freakin HOT! Love the visual you painted as to how they were during this whole 'proving a point' session! And even though he's only 16, he sure as heck knows exactly what to do! "Thats how I know this cant be all wrong". Damn does he know how to prove a point. But I say she should ask for some more thorough proof, lol. Look forward to more from this drabble series. great job, Hugs ;)
| Jamie chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
i have read most of you work and it is all really good and i wanted to tell you to keep up the amazingly-beastly-hot stuff you are doing
| Amanda Wilder chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
Again, just total fun and smexy as hell. Hope you have time to check out my 1001 Jacobian Nights if you're looking for some j/b lovin'.
k...off to check out your other stuff...
| Amanda Wilder chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
Whew! Awesome hottness. And lovely writing! I'm so glad I found this fic. Jake is the perfect mixture of lust and protector here.
| Amanda Wilder chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Crazy good! A j/b smutfest is my favorite thing, to write and to read, and your writing is beautiful! Here's hoping Eddie has to watch when they finally go all the way...
| BoysNBooksRBetter chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
| notashamedtobe chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
How can she like anything but a porno queen when with jake? ;)
| jharv241 chapter 3 . 5/17/2011
That was too damn funny Jacob coming to the house with Bella making them noises and her not knowing who was behind her. I love these drabbles, and I hope you definitely continue with them.
| jharv241 chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Awesome chapter! I'm glad she came back to see him. Jacob had me LMAO with her dog Molly, especially when he told Bella he doesn't speak dog!
| jharv241 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Love it! It was definitely in your face Myer to me. I wished it happened in the book. He should have kidnapped her ass and talk some sense into her.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Oh my! Why don't you post on TATS? I know your name somehow or other, but don't think I've actually read anything of yours till now. Which will be changed, immediately.
Loved this. This is what Jacob was all about - stopping Bella from ending her life. And I love when authors hit the nail on the head like you did - Bella is cray-cray. Who else wants to die for their boyfriend? And thinks 18 is over the hill? And who gets married just to get laid? Besides Mormons, I mean. LOL
I love giving prompts, but not sure what exactly you're looking for? All post Eclipse, I'm assuming? You've actually covered (quite well, I might add) one of my favorites - Jacob kidnapping Bella after he comes out of the trees at her wedding (hottest mental pic EVER).
Audreyii_fic has already done the 'Edward allows Bella to have puppies w/Jacob' scenario. And I think it would be very hard-pressed for anyone to top Definition of Want, so I won't go there.
Hmmm, but I will definitely think on it and get back to you. :)
Again, great fic!