Reviews for Dogs Mating To Cats, Unheard Of
tigerdc101 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I think you did a grate job for your first lemon. I think you face a bright future.
hikora chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Oh yeah! No one can take them apart. And if they ever try, then they better be prepared to face their raft! Hoho Great story, I can only say live happily ever after and don't let anything do you part. And maybe, WHY DID YOU NOT CONTINUED ON IT? It could have been even better. *POUT*
XamierTheNobody chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
This was a bit crappy and during the sex scene you seem to have forgotten that Naruto GOT HIS TAIL CUT OFF. You wrote that his tail tried to cover his legs...He doesn't have a tail because you wrote that it had been cut off. You brought this up a ton of times like when Sasuke was describing Naruto during the sex scene. You might want to go back and check for errors. Inconsistency can be annoying to read. The plot was good but the grammar could use some help.
phantomsonic chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Holy shit that was HOT
Sebby-chan3000 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
aaaaaaaw
YokuMiya chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Wow. Pretty cool.
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Cool, and not bad- pretty damn good if I do say so myself.
SasuNaru125 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
This story was very good. You did a wounderful job. I loved that you made Sasuke a dog it just seems right to you. I enjoyed reading this story very much.
Stealthy Ninja chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
that was wow awesome story idea and writing style that was really good _
bladestarF60blazer chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
it was good in a furry are good ar add more detail.
XxReni-chanxX chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Ahaha! Soooo cute! :3 This story was just flat out adorable! Plus the lemon didn't suck! You did a great job for your first time writing one! And favoriting...now!:D
Inu-bitch chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Cool story. Keep up with the lemons and you will have me as a regular reader. :) LOVED IT!
annabellemanix chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors...I would advise that next time you use a spellcheck and proofread you work. _''
Bad Writer xD chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Awz! I'm so honored to be in this xD but ... I'm bad ass! I'd kick ass then laugh! :D lolz ... lies! xD

Ok professional opinion ... Your story was great! the idea, the theme, and the whole situation was wonderful, but the grammar kind of threw me off! I'm not saying you should go around saying "maternal fornicator! you shall die in the pits of hades as the wench that you are, you cod licking fein!" (Translation: M***F** got to H*** you C*** sucking B***) :D lolz

Anyways, just edit it and repost it up later because this story is wonderful! :D

... nice touch on the Ita girl ;D lolz ... is she married to someone? o. o? lolz! xD
xxxwallflowerxxx chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
cute
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