Reviews for Dark Passions
BloodPokemon101 chapter 1 . 8/24
I've read all the chapters and I love this fanfic, but don't tell me it's a Naruto/FemSasuke/Hinata story now. It was fine just being Naruto/FemSasuke. Why do all authors feel the need to add Hinata? And the part where Naruto decides to abandon the village, and out of nowhere Hinata comes...freaking Hinata out of all people joins Naruto. That's been used SO many times I've lost count. So, no I'm not surprised when Hinata decides to join. It was so predictable...that there are no words to describe how predictable it was. The only difference is that FemSasuke decides to join, too. Without that, it would have been same old Naruto/Hinata story that's been reused a hundred times already. I can already see this turning into a harem, and I just hope it doesn't.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/8
im sorry but when the fuck are naruto and sasuke going to get together you even put it in the goddamn title that they were going to be rivals and lovers and then you go and pull this shit im sorry i usually have a high tolerance for this stuff but christ man dont say one thing and then take 6 chapters or more to get the actual pairing going now i personally dont like sakura her personality makes her a bitch in my opinion she manipulates him into bringing back the guy who doesnt even like then she tries to do it again she only really acknowledges him after his training with jiraiya then she sorta mellows out i might not of had as much of a problem with her in this story if you didnt have her pretty much being a goddamn puppy i mean this chapter and her fight with them is the perfect example it can be more classified as a beating than a fight and as soon as naruto gets back shes back to her weak willed puppy personality personaly i just cant stand it otherwise good story
Yanoakc chapter 11 . 8/5
Should've continued the story. It was pretty good.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/4
Why the fuck does naruto let sasuke push him around! He's acting like a fucking pussy!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/31
you have put way to much drama in this
dragonbuster117 chapter 9 . 7/16
You're going to turn our children into sociopaths, Fugaku!Mikoto ... if only they knew...
indigoknight137 chapter 7 . 7/12
"Make him suffer…slowly!" I died when I saw this
Guest chapter 11 . 6/7
las cagaste con hinata
Sabere Commander chapter 11 . 6/1
Why the ending here?
narugokuichigo6 chapter 11 . 5/23
Nice plot orochimaru getting sasuke was expected though and kumo was a nice twist overall I'd give u a 10 nice job and hope u send out chapter 12 soon
destiny bunn chapter 2 . 5/19
Hi this is very good i was wondering if i could post this to wattpad. Can u answer by emailing me at ? Thx
The Kamereon chapter 11 . 5/4
Ossu naruFemsasu!

Ossu Kumo Nin!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/3
Update :(
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30
You suck chapter 11 . 3/27
You suck just stop writing fanfiction you've got no future bitch...just go suck someone's balls twat face
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