Reviews for Edge Of Darkness
Guest chapter 6 . 12/17/2015
Ypi said that Tom would be cruel, well so far from what I have read he just seems the same as any fanfiction I've read
Ariel Riddle chapter 10 . 8/14/2015
This was a really good duel, the most exciting I've read probably. I do hope you finished this story I am almost done reading it. 5 chapters to go. And I am totally falling for your version of Tom, he is written expertly.
xxx chapter 15 . 8/8/2015
You know, I actually started liking this story for the first few chapters, but after that, things started to get really boring. The OC's for instance. I feel like that OC's just ruin everything in fanfictions, canon characters are the best. Your story could be a little more better without the OC's. Another thing is that Hermione and Draco are a little OOC as each chapter comes along. Your story does need a little more improvement; nonetheless it was interesting.
UNFORGlVABLES chapter 15 . 5/21/2015
Aww. Hope you can update soon! This story is really interesting
UNFORGlVABLES chapter 9 . 5/21/2015
Is there going to be Dramione here?

Because if there is, then my heart won't handle it.

I just

HelloIamGracie chapter 15 . 12/22/2014
I'm really enjoying this story, and am excited to read more! So I really hope you update soon! I'll be looking forward to it!
Hunter's Way chapter 14 . 4/8/2014 exciting, I would absolutely love to find out what happens to Ivy.
Calairel Saralonde chapter 15 . 2/12/2014
hey just to tell i aabsolutly loved the story and i really hope you will continue! it iwas my first Tomione, and still my favorite! Tom and Hermione interractions were great! please keep going on with this story!
Person P chapter 15 . 1/29/2014
I know the feeling of have too much in your plate with the school but when you can update, I really love this story.
Harper chapter 5 . 1/27/2014
In Chapter 5 you wrote platform 3 3/4, but it's 9 3/4. Also, the spell is Lumos, not Lumus. Some small errors, but overall good story so far.
Delusional Witch chapter 7 . 1/4/2014
How can Hermione have dueled deatheaters and survived on the run, but was easily defeated by two teenage boys. *smh* I Hate contrived plot points.
Hinata'sMuse chapter 15 . 12/3/2013
I am eagerly awaiting the next thrilling installment! Good luck in college, I am currently there struggling with you! :3
LCB chapter 15 . 11/12/2013
School comes first! Get your study on!
Shizyldrew chapter 15 . 11/11/2013
I hope u can update this story soon.
lizlizard chapter 15 . 11/10/2013
Better late than never, is what I say. I'm sure we all understand that somethings take precedence over others. Still, hope to hear from you sooner rather than later. Best pf luck and best wishes xx
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