Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
This is really nice. I've always loved Mai, and it's so very sad that she's often not included in these. She's a wonderful character. The thing is I love both pairings, so it's a bit difficult to read one or the other. You're writing is wonderful toopportunity, by the way. Very formal. It has a sort of elegance about it. I find it quite appealing. You should continue writing. You have a talent and loads of potential. My point is: this was wonderful, both writing and story.
A Caccia Di Stelle chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
It was well written. Thats all I have to say. . .
Ixae chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
This was short, but very well-written. It made me feel like I had to review. I think it's good to put Mai's perspective into Zutara, because sometimes in people's excitement of writing it they forget about Mai, who was the canon pairing of Zuko in the show. I hope this story gets more reviews, because I think it deserves it. If you have any plans to make more or turn it into a spin-off story, I think you should.
Sabby13 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
So good! I love it. I always feel bad that Mai is always overlooked in Zutara. Her & Zuko actually did have a good relationship and she's not just some stupid girl who wouldn't pick up on her childhood sweetheart suddenly changing to good instead of just fighting for power!

Is there going to be more? Please do! I'm so over the Zutara prisoner stories!