Reviews for Bl'dy Jack
WolfishMoon chapter 11 . 2/12/2013
Am I allowed to squeal in fangirling delight?
Exellent work! A few quick things I'd like to point out, the story line is almost too condensed in some places, and also you said that sixteen year old Jacky had the body of a twelve year old. Most twelve year olds have reached puberty, on average girls get their menstrual cycle at eleven, I personally know some one who got it at nine, and was fully developed by the time she was twelve. So... If you're gonna include female puberty, I'd suggest more thorough research. Other than that, this was excellent and the whole 'Jacky hitting puberty with a body already at twelve' was merely a continuity error. Great job! On to read the next... After my Japanese class is over. Technically, I should be doing a warmup.
jades113 chapter 5 . 5/14/2011
I love it so far! The storyline seems a bit rushed so far, but I will say no more as I have only read through chapter four. I will keep reading!
Captain Ea Rayos chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Nice story! :D
Captain Ea Rayos chapter 9 . 4/29/2011
Woot! It's almost ending already!
Captain Ea Rayos chapter 6 . 4/26/2011
Hahaha and now come the craziness! XD
Captain Ea Rayos chapter 5 . 4/25/2011
Nice! Continue! :D