Reviews for Vongola New Weapon Chap1
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
hahaha walau~ pineapple head, molester~ nice one, but why u dint describe anything wan? like how does the classroom looks like or somethind else? and y did u use short form? from to frm... haiz... but still very funny la~ i i oso wan to write one but i dun have any plot... well, keep up! i'm waiting 4 chapter 2 to come out! pls be fast, or u'll noe wat will happen~ *smile* kolkolkol
ArcSepierCiel chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Yay,so awesome_you really did a good job,anyways tnx and ganbatte;D
kyurikochan chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Not bad :D Juz some grammar error. And put disclaimer. Eg: I dun own Katekyo Hitman Reborn. Still can improve! Good luck! XD