Reviews for Apply Within
NatalieLynn chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Very interesting and intriguing beginning. I look forward to reading more soon.
AmzyK5089 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Is it a strip club or something? The story is awesome

And I want my Jasper Cookie! He is sooo HOT!
TheWhitlocksGirl chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Well, you have my attention :)
LittleRin26 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I admit I am extremely curious. You have my full attention author. Go ahead...
kouga's older woman chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Lovin this story! Can I have some more please?
BkLvr69 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I really enjoyed reading this beginning chapter! It was very well written and you've got a good introduction to your story. I think I know what will happen next, but I still look forward to your next update. :) Keep up the great work!
LithiumReaper chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I like it.. pretty cool :)
southernwandlover84 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
CAn't wait to find out what's going on with the cafe.
Caro09 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Sounds Great!
nashvillona chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I loveee it :)
Nyx Nuit chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
SavageGraceX chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Love it! I'm just wondering why Alice is oh-so-important to him? /
VivreLaVie25 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
An interesting idea you have here. Finding out more should be fun, I hope you have a chapter up soon.
A chapter 1 . 4/21/2011

I like your story though. I can't wait to find out what goes on in a cafe! So unexpected. I also can't wait for the Jasper LOVE! I WANT MY COOKIE!