Reviews for When He Lost
PetitMoi207 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Awww! You made me cry! I have to re aply my mascara mow. But it a really amazing story!
BelieveInTheHoundsOfJustice60 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Beautifully done
seablue4u chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
aww you made me cry! Thank goodness JKR had him survive.
taylorelizabeth12 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I like the idea of the story, but the massive amounts of repition were distracting. The story even though you tried did not behold much emotional depth.