Reviews for Punishment from His General
DestielFan chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
hahaha "severely" I should start putting that on letters haha. btw I loved it, so cute.
1sunfun chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Nice.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
cute.
Loveless Paradox chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Lol fuck that was hot! Totally worth the read and review... I dont normally review but this one CALLED for one. It was damn sexy, and i would totally have loved if it was longer but it's ok like this 3 *wipes drool*
Aphera chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Excellent piece of work! I hope that this may continue, I'd like to see how far this goes. I'd have to say, your name fit's you well, Master Yoda of Yaoi. I love it! I hope there is more to this story. 3
This-Account-Is-Innactive chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Kinky.. I like it... too bad there isn't more D:
Luna Cool chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
1 your username is kick ass! 2 loved the story keep it upp!
Kirvin chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Nice! Poor little Cloud loves to be punished.

Will there be a chapter two? ;D
Haruhaze chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
woah, I like this sly-and-sneaky Sephy, and what can u say about Cloud? Poor him. Anyway, good job!
Yzzy chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
LOL. I liked very much the idea about the yellow paper, ja,ja,ja.
Kerttu chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
*laughter and snickering is heard* Goddess, I loved this turn-about! Very-very gooooood! Seph being sneaky AND demanding at the same time is oh-so-hot!

Teeny typo:

The room went s

I think you meant it went "silent". I suspect ff . net ate your last word there.
Illulian chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
*fans away steam* very hawt! You have a great sense of humor, that for the laughs