Reviews for Saving Their Friend
Redsparrow3 chapter 11 . 1/22/2012
That was the best chapter yet :)

But I cannot believe yet another cliffhanger Ahhhhhhhh

I mean the obvious thing would be the time machine going boom but

what if it didn't what if what actually happened was Wilbur woke

up or Violet could of passed out too!


Why the cliffhanger why always the cliff hangers!

Anyway so I love this chapter best but that it so far!

Pls update soon I must know what happens next, I absolutely must!

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
hedgi chapter 11 . 1/22/2012
oh, nice. blow them up, why don't you.

wait, i didn't mean it! update soon! don't kill them!
Redsparrow3 chapter 8 . 1/22/2012
HI again again!

(due to me being a new member I

have to wait a while to private

message or whatever

and so I am writing to u from

here instead I hope u don't mind me doing

so sorry if you do though)


Yes very exciting!

Yay me :)

Yay yay yay yay yay

Chapter 11 is on its way and just

made my day!

I can't wait!

I already know it will be as good

and maybe even better then the other

chapters! U left a real cliffhanger

back there!

The misery of homework :(

Homework is evil :0

Thanx 4 the thanx(s) that also made

my day :)

Your welcom for the reveiws!

Every chapter was amazing!

That doesn't matter, things will always come

before writing u just gotta keep moving

forward and it's all ok :)

Thank you!

I will certainly enjoy being a fanfic member!

For sure :)

Sincerely Redsparrow3

PS. Thanx 4 making my day twice!

And good luck with seniors keep on writing

and moving forward to the future :)
Redsparrow3 chapter 10 . 1/22/2012
Hello again :)

It is I redsparrow3 who now has a fanfiction


It's all very very exciting!

Pls continue with this story as it is absolutely

amazing and I must know the rest!

I would also like to say that it is u my friend

that inspired me to make an account and

to write fanfiction stories

When will I publish my first story?

Not even I know :)

Till we meet again awesome writer :)

Sincerely Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 chapter 10 . 1/22/2012
I did not spend 5 or so hours for the story to stop there u absolutely must update AHHHHHHH why oh why must u be so good with cliff hangers jeez :)

Pretty pretty pls update plsssssss

Also I love the hislishography part I was sitting there for a while just imagining what they would teach in that subject if it were real!

And I liked that u put in Wilbur walking into the time machine lol!

Also Violet keeps getting awesomer and awesomer (is that a word? Who cares!)

Pls u absolutely must update I am begging u plssssss

I love this story

Sincerely Redsparrow3

PS pls update :)


Oh man I soo hope u have atleast 5 reviews!

Well u should coz I don't understand why someone wouldn't like this story!

Oh and I'm sorry about the teacher with cancer :(

And sorry if that upset u with me bringing it up

Sorry :(

Pls update!

(wow that was a long ps!)
Redsparrow3 chapter 9 . 1/22/2012
Hey a question

What does dftbe or whatever that thing is that u write mean/ stand 4?

Great chapter u really can write with the understanding of Wilbur's personality kinda thing if u get what I mean!

This would make a great meet the robinsons two btw :)

Sincerely Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 chapter 8 . 1/22/2012
Just like to say great story and that Violet is awesome!
Redsparrow3 chapter 7 . 1/22/2012
And the best I've seen in my life like EVER!

I would just like to say I love the letter to Wilbur and the letter both the boys wrote to Cornelious

They were really interesting (and funny!)

I also love the "because Wilbur Robinson never fails... At breaking into the time lab"


Oh and I keep loving Violets personality more and more!

Sincerely Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 chapter 6 . 1/22/2012
I like Wilbur's perspective of the cafeteria and how it is different from the future :)

I've said this once and I'll say it again I cannot wait to read more!
Redsparrow3 chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
Well until then it had never occurred to me

what a perfect conversation topic duct tape

could make, but there u go!

This is seriously getting more and more

interesting and this is definitely the most

chapters I have ever reviewed in one fanfiction

story which is a very good sign!

Keep up the good work :)

Sincerely Redsparrow3

PS Violet is beginning to take form in my mind

she is an awesome character can't wait to read

Redsparrow3 chapter 4 . 1/22/2012

Violet is in the story!

Thank u 4 this awesome story!
Redsparrow3 chapter 3 . 1/22/2012

I laughed so much at the taco thing!

This story is AWESOME!

Redsparrow3 chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Lol what did Wilbur have on his taco!

Nice :)

Great chapter again!
Redsparrow3 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Excellent 1st chapter!

Cannot wait to

I could vividly imagine this bit...

Wilbur had to admit that his father looked

pretty bad ass doing that. Carl shrieked

and ran into the nearest closet.


Good job :)
C.C chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
I hope you didn't die now, I read the entire story in record time just to find that you have 4 months without updating! Now you have 9 reviews so what are you waiting for? please do it (send virtual slap :P)
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