just one short bit. If Hermione the dictionary/encyclopedia was not so prominent in this
fic I'd have great things to say about it but thank merlin for my mouse cause I can scroll her out as much as possible. nuff said.

I had to stop here. The story is fairly solid, even if DracoxGinny is a bit dumb. The problem is that you really need to rewrite a huge part of it or get a beta. Situations feel odd, expressed incorrectly, and rushed which really hurts this.

I enjoyed the story, thanks!

I can't understand how naive can someone be to think that Ginny (or Hermione) could date Draco after everything he did.

Seriously it just made me sick and I'm stopping this fic after I finished to throw up.

There are so many gaping holes...please fill them in. (no innuendo intended).

will Harry find out he has a child on the next visit to the other realm? If so, how will Ginny handle that?

Malfoy is so petty he will rape and kill Ginny just to prevent her being with Harry.

Damn...nice twist. I wonder if this is like the mirror image thing happening here?

Draco thinks he is clever, but what he has done is made sure that he is tortured before he dies.

I was hoping that Harry was possessed or something, but it seems that he has flipped his lid.

Harry is such an ass.

nice pacing... shame it wasn't really an enjoyable story. no real payoff at the end, either.

Called it! Called it! I so, totally called it!

Well... It was what I hoped would happen. I kept remembering Harry the last time we saw him. YAY

OMG.. Well I knew Ron or Hermione were going to know the girl. Had no idea it was Selene I think her name is. Wow that means little Charlie is Charlie's son. WOW. Good one.