Reviews for Ambush on Wa'ahila Ridge
Robin's Nest Chick chapter 11 . 10/29/2016
Good story! One minor quibble though: the Navy doesn't have sergeants and officers don't go thru boot camp. With almost 500 reviews, I'm probably not the first person to point that out. Ha-ha! Anyway, I'm a little more than halfway through and it's an interesting mystery for the gang.
karen chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
I had no idea you had written so many stories for H50. I only have ML stories set up to read at . Maybe I'll give your H50 stories a try. So few writers are still writing ML anymore, so I thank you profusely for continuing my Mick and Beth fantasies.
bobbieturn chapter 24 . 9/14/2015
This was great. Well written, interesting story line and good characterizations. I started reading your latest, then found these so have started at the bottom and working my way up. Looks like I have a lot of good reading ahead of me. Thanks so much!
Skimball4 chapter 5 . 4/5/2015
Fun to read...keep it up:)
FicreaderT chapter 24 . 6/11/2012
I liked this story very much - you did a nice job developing the plot and the characters. It was neither over- nor underdone and contained the right amount of whump, hurt, comfort, etc... I especially enjoyed that Steve survived and then thrived in spite of his injuries (I loved that the attorney found Steve somewhat intimidating even with the cast and crutches) because he is a superSEAL after all. I'm going to go check your profile to discover what else you've written for H50!
FicreaderT chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
Powerful last paragraph!
FicreaderT chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
Of course he can hold on! I am looking forward to reading more, though!
FicreaderT chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
An interesting start... I am intrigued!
Runner043 chapter 24 . 10/21/2011
Liked the ending. Glad Catherine made it back before your story was over.
Runner043 chapter 15 . 10/21/2011
have been reading your story, am up to ch.15. Glad you included Catherine :-)
aolver chapter 24 . 10/14/2011
I decided tonight to check out your Moonlight stories, as I do periodically. I have a tendency to reread my favorite ML writers. I had no idea you were writing H50 fic. I have tried in the past to read H50 stories, without success. I just haven't been into anything but Moonlight and MickBeth. I decided to try this story and I really enjoyed it. I think it has to do with the fact that you are a good writer and you made H50 fan fic more interesting for me. did NOT write a SteveKono pairing! Yuk! AND... I love Moonlight FF too much to stray too far away. Thank you.
bushy4 chapter 15 . 10/9/2011
yeah rachel and danny!

boo catherine

you got me with the kono night shift line! bummer...
bushy4 chapter 9 . 10/9/2011
oh i don't like catherine i love kono and steve

i am keeping some hope...
wotumba1 chapter 24 . 9/26/2011
great story, really enjoyed reading it!

hope you've got more for us readers!
wotumba1 chapter 23 . 9/26/2011
must be hard on steve only to be able to observe, but you're right, this is steve, and only observing will never be his thing ;-)
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