Reviews for A Controlled Soul
Last Breath chapter 10 . 8/3/2016
Wow, what the fuck was that. Like I wish some would happen in the show but not everyone dying.
Desiree Nickels chapter 10 . 8/25/2014
InuKag4evertogether chapter 10 . 3/9/2012
so u kill everyone of? wow. even inu, who knew? but i feel for kagome, i mean in the end it even says he used her! inu how dare u! i cant believe u did that!
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
hmmm... poor inuyasha.
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
nice start
RubyJeweler chapter 10 . 6/7/2011
Thanks for the update. Happy Birthday! (
nikkidanielle14 chapter 7 . 6/2/2011
great chapter, loved it.
Saissister chapter 7 . 5/29/2011
KagomesDarkHeart chapter 7 . 5/27/2011
KDH:Pure will be come impure,Light will sub come to darkness and Kagome will KICK ASS!

Hebi:What the hell and i thought you ware going all poetic on me.

KDH:I just couldn't help my Kagome's kick but.

Hebi:Yeah and this Kagome is really cold blooded and you know me i like my lady's strong so she's got that all she needs to do is see Naraku for the weak hafe breed he is and hook up with a full blood demon like me.

KDH:Hebi she would chew you up and spit you out.

Hebi:Really i think i like the sound of that.


come on and add the story to fav's and let's get out of here.

Hebi:Alright alright...Hay you thing it will be updated soon.I want to see the cat fight that sure to come.

nikkidanielle14 chapter 5 . 5/2/2011
pleaseee updateee!:DD

realllyy enjoyingg itt!
nikkidanielle14 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Wow, really like it so far...not too many kagome/naraku pairings.

thanks for writing(:
Taeniaea chapter 5 . 4/28/2011
great chapter
Taeniaea chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
cool story
PARADISE.x chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
Such a good story! PLEASE CONTINUE IT! You are a good write. Poor shippo. I dont feel that bad for InuYasha though, he kinda deserved it. But, still, I said, "InuYasha, nooooooooo!"

Keep up the great story writing!
Spazghetti chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Very, Very Nice . I Like Your Style Of Writing So Far . Not Too Much Happiness, More Realism. ~Applauds~ Good Job .