Спорный фанфик. Есть и плюсы и минусы. Много повтора канона, много нового. Но ... В последней битве вообще не сопереживал героям. Когда озвучивали список жертв, внутри вообще ничего не дрогнуло. В любом случае, спасибо за работу. Удачи

I m not a native speaker, but even I can see the amount of errors in the text. Use a dictionary. Trail and trial are different things, same with waste and waist and their, they're and there or than and then. There are more of those in your text.
And the healing for sectumsempra is vulnera sanentur not phecumsempra.

Fucking fantastic read, I literally could not stop reading it, I'm on like hour 35 of being awake, so thanks I guess.

Stuff like this kills me even though I love this story:

"If you asked last year I would've said the Firebolt but the Nike broom kinda grew on me," Harry replied, "though I'm leaning towards my Firebolt, it's got more speed, better for me as a seeker.

You explicitly stated that the Nike was faster when Harry got it. Also each Nike broom was tailored to the position it was used for. Finally, you had Victor Krum himself say the Nike was better. These things could be avoided by just having a spreadsheet or notebook with this info easily laid out so you remember.
Obviously I don't expect this story to be updated, but just putting this here in the event you write more in the future.

The Leaky Cauldron is Diagon Alley... not the Three Broomsticks.

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Really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.

The battle scene was really well done. The new Marauders did great! I can't believe you had Slytherin beat the living hell out of Michael Corner when the poor guy lost his hand in the potions explosion a few chapters ago lol. Since it was cursed off, maybe the could regrow it?

I love this story. It's great! But, my guy, Harry has been side-alonged at least twice before this. Not that it matters lol

espera que los potter son pocionistas son reconocidos como eso si bien en muchas historia lo ponen como guerreros o otras cosas siempre dejan pocionistas

Now that's just stupid Hadrian, Hardwin. bloody decide.

An amazing story!

They came close to using the triplets as bait. Perhaps they could have relocated them to the Headmaster's office or the Room of Requirement or any number of places where they could be heavily guarded. The blasted door alone would make the arrests valid. Sirius and Amelia just dashed away, falling for the diversionary trick? Excellent story, well written and entertaining. Thanks

Hardwin. Harry, Hadrian. Doesn't matter. Good story

What's the point of saying he prefers Hardwin then having his friends and even some others call him Harry? With the whole wizarding world knowing him as Harry for years, Hardwin was going to be difficult to sell, especially when they've never heard of Hardwin. . Are Slytherins going to divide along the lines of...oh, I don't like him, so I'll call him Hardwin and those who say, oh yeah, he's alright, I'll call him Harry?