|Reviews for Thanks to a Snake|
| eriknav chapter 55 . 3/15
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| redfox-9 chapter 1 . 3/13
Great chapter! I really liked it :-)
Only one thing I noted, there are some errors in this chapter, mostly regarding verb tenses. You change from past to present in the same sentence. I think that is very confusing for the reader.
Anyway, as I said, I like this story :-)
| Haruchan-chan chapter 55 . 3/11
Really cool story.
| Jessie23 chapter 55 . 3/8
This was an amazing story! I loved it very much, and it was a joy to read! :)
| GravityTonttu chapter 54 . 3/10
Ok, on your list of casualties, you mentioned Susan, Ernie and Hannah, who, obviously, are alive in the epilogue. It also seems you forgot Ron, though she may have not told him because Harry saw his death himself.
| Hallenee chapter 55 . 3/4
Amazing! There are a few errors here and there but your fresh ideas, great character development and way of writing mame them fade into the background. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, thank you.
| BlackSheep123 The Sage chapter 41 . 3/4
And they walk out like bad asses
| onlytoask chapter 1 . 2/28
Oh wow this is not very good. It only took a couple paragraphs to tell. A few paragraphs in and you had already managed to have horrible grammar and more than one cliche.
| CM-x-SN-x-HP-x-roxmysox chapter 55 . 2/25
Absolutely loved this story! Keep up the good work!
| darrian808 chapter 32 . 2/19
insane definitely insane
| rowenasheir chapter 32 . 2/18
witch - wears a robe and pointy hat
Which - conjunction
| rowenasheir chapter 15 . 2/18
we're we are; were - plural of was
Know - to have knowledge of no - negative
their pronoun there place they're - they are
not following out but fall out
feint - faint (unconscious) fake- not real
| rowenasheir chapter 8 . 2/18
Watch out for homophones and homonyms!
Trial - judged in court
Trail - Path
| fivefingerfredy chapter 7 . 2/17
'I will not become a murder and rapists, I will not bow to him.' REALLY? This chapter is one tenth the size of a regular chapter, and yet it still retains ridiculous mistakes like this. How long does is take to do a little proof reading and avoid simple mistakes?
| fivefingerfredy chapter 4 . 2/17
I am enjoying this story very much so far. The only complaint that I have is the deploring lack of editing and spell checking. It is just ridiculous when two or three letter words are being misspelled. punctuation and sentence structure is also a large issue. It makes me wonder if the author is even reading each chapter after he writes it. Just one read through would solve quite a few of the spelling and punctuation issues. besides these problems, the story so far is wonderful and I am looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds.