well we never got those cute little on shots but still a damn amazing story I kinda wanted to see what the after life was like for bumbles and volde

Loved it

I'd need to go back a few chapters, but have you changed Harry's full name somewhere? It's definitely Hadrian now, but wasn't it Hardwin earlier? I'm so confused.

I really like your story :)

Don't recall the crafter using gems, but my eyes may have skipped over that part. Other custom makers have used them as foci so that's cool

Holy shit

Loved it, keep up the good writing!

You changed Hardwin to Hadrian

I noticed that in chapter 3, you started calling Harry Hadrian instead of Hardwin. This is not a complaint, as Hadrian, having been used in other fics, seems to be easier on the tongue and mind. To my thoughts, Hardwin was a difficult name to remember. Thank goodness it was not Harfang.

Really enjoying the story, though I'm a bit confused - at the beginning Gringots told Hadrian that he was emancipated. But at the end of the chapter the Greengrass family replaced Dumbledore as his magical guardians?

I love this story it’s going in the top 10

Enjoyed it!

I’m glad to see Harry at least thought of giving someone the map, but it was too late when he thought about it. And I realize that some things have to happen, but my gosh, the characters are supposed to be smarter and well informed, they should have made a third map, since Sirius knew how, and had someone watching that think 24/7.

Would have been good if you had just kept Harry's name consistent and proofread a bit better.

So I’m only a little ways through this chapter and I’m wondering why Moony has yet to make his appearance to catch back up with Padfoot.

Great, so we get the diary out of Ginny’s hands, but now a Hufflepuff finds the diadem. Awesome.