Reviews for Traitors
Hallows Searcher chapter 15 . 12/14/2011
Love this story, it's amazing! Caterina is such an interesting character, but still trying to figure out what keeps bringing her back to Jadis...

Anyway, love the story, update soon!

- Hallows Searcher
alicelouise'x chapter 12 . 7/4/2011
eh? Susan mean? That was really shocking!

I can't wait for Caterina to hear Peter's marriage proposal between her and Asriel, she and Ed are gonne flip... OH! I bet it's not with Asriel but his son! ;O

Lovely chapter as always :))
EgyLynx chapter 12 . 7/3/2011
soo what will happen at 13. ? lets see?
Elessar chapter 9 . 6/6/2011
Wow...I stumbled upon this story, and... promply read all nine chapters. :)I simply MUST know what happens next!
Lhmac chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
Nice cliffhanger :P

I do like your Edmund. And Susan is so sad - she always makes me sad, because she was my favourite character, and I just can't ever forget her ending
alicelouise'x chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
ohmygoooood, poor Finn :( poor Ed... Poor Cat!

Looking forward to the time Jadis shows her face to Edmund!
alicelouise'x chapter 8 . 5/29/2011
whoaaa... Peter as well! Oh my gosh, this is really brilliant! Simply gorgeous!

You're making this soooo interesting, and not like other stories where you start with the closet and the original story and the plot of the original story changes slightly.

No you start straight when Ed, Peter, Susan and Lucy were Kings&Queens with a 5th child, and the past unknown to us!

How did Caterina end up with Jadis? ;o I'm dying to know that!
alicelouise'x chapter 7 . 5/20/2011

This is briliant! Just amazing!

Peterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr you idiot! I don't like you anymore if you keep on rowing with Caterina!

One question; Why doesn't Peter like Caterina? Is it because of the way she acts?

And I really love Caterina's character, I don't sympathise with her, cause I can really understand her.

Of course you want to join your best friend in adventures, of course you'd rather go out riding then being cooped up in dresses and having to be polite to people you don't know and might not even like.

It's just the kind of person Caterina is, and to top everything, no one really knows about her past! So who is Pete to judge her when he doesn't know everything about her yet ;L

I don't know.. I find myself arguing along with Caterina towards Peter (: She's briliant! Welldone!
Lhmac chapter 6 . 5/15/2011
It struck me as I read this chapter: are we supposed to be sympathetic towards Caterina? Yes, she's had a hard life - but that was eight years ago and now she's totally just a whiner. Of course, most Narnia characters started off being unsympathetic in nature, so we'll see how it goes :P

I'm still interested, still reading. Keep writing on :D
Lhmac chapter 3 . 4/28/2011
I certainly have a bit of a hesitation about OCs, and Peter seems a bit meaner than I'd have painted him, but I'm intrigued by your story :)

More, more :D
Pendragon2601 chapter 3 . 4/26/2011
I really like how you've characterised Edmund Peter and Catarina so far in this story. This is a really good story so far and it is worth it, just because there isn't many people reviewing it doesn't mean that people aren't reading it. I'd like to see how this goes.

Oh! And congratulations on being the first story I've come across with perfect spelling and grammar in it! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Pendragon2601 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
This sounds quite interesting and I like Caterina. She seems like a caged bird. I can't wait until the next chapter.