That was beautiful! Some of the chapters didn't work for me, but I still got the gist of it. I'm so glad they found each other on the end.

Shit ending to her finding him alive again in her correct time in his correct tone ! Wtf ! ? …. and Why are they not back together again ? Wtf ! ? … and why did she leave again I mean walk out the door and leave him ? Wtf ! ? …

Weird ! Isn’t Hermione at the school ? Won’t Severus recognise hermione as Emma? weird? and emma as hermione ? Weird ?

What was he waiting for ? The attack on the potters? If he knew the attack on the potters was going to happen then on Halloween why didn’t he stop the attack ? What the the headmaster mean by The Aurors will be coming for you. why would they come for Severus ? What he mean You will be safe in your office until my return? How would he be safe until the headmaster comes back and after he come back hoe will he be safe ? Safe from who ?

Voldemort has fallen. Lilly and James are dead. The Aurors will be coming for you. You will be safe in your office until my return. The child lives."

Such an unusual and original take on the time-travel story. I really enjoyed this. I hope you return someday with an epilogue!

It's so delicate and beautiful that it kept me captivated until the very end even the second time around.
Thank you so much 3

Sht! I’m crying! Wonderful story, thank you!

Absolutely wonderful! Not once did this story loose its momentum, so well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing this with us! :-)

So glad they ended up back together-i was worried for a bit there of how this would end!

I haven't reviewed yet, but I love it so far. I've seen the Timetraveler's Wife years ago, so that makes the jumps easier for my brain to handle and process, otherwise I'd be very lost I think lol.
I'm curious what she heard crying in town when she was lost from a jump- given how he knew the area so well in curious if it was a younger version of himself crying about something or another.
I really am happy she's found her way back to him now though- hopefully the "my Severus" part didn't go unnoticed by him (I doubt it did); perhaps the knowledge that there someone completely on his side will help him to not make the same mistakes we know he has in her future, or perhaps she's the reason he was able to turn spy and continue on the hard and lonely path that he does, instead of turning fully to the dark side.

Recently I have started so many stories that can't hold my attention. But this one did so beautifully. Fuck me, this was amazing. The pacing, the plot, the characterisations, all of it perfect.

A-maz-ing! Brilliantly written and throughly enjoyed!

oh my god it’s so good! thank you!

This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will certainly return to this story again.

I just realised I have read all 4 of your stories published here. I'm gonna now go sniffle over the sad fact that you don't have any more here. Again, thank you for your time and efforts in making this story available to us. You are a gem.

This was an enjoyable and well written story. I really appreciate that it treated time travel in a way that didn't make the characters overly powerful and therefore dull. A good amount of twists was additionally pleasant. Thank you, Marianne Le Fay and your betas! Fanfiction can be such a comforting experience, and i will likely return to this story again.