Reviews for One Change can make a big Difference
Sphix macaw chapter 10 . 5/12
um sorry next few days its been years can you please contine
monsterjamvadim chapter 10 . 5/4/2016
COOL BRO
monsterjamvadim chapter 9 . 5/4/2016
NAME THE KIDS

CARLA BIA AND TIAGO
RIOLOGY chapter 10 . 2/13/2016
Yup. I think the author is dead. Rest in peace... R.I.P '(
Calvin chapter 5 . 5/23/2015
Have you written a lemon that has happened in the story chapter? If not, then I think you should write it.
juanpablobro chapter 10 . 1/27/2015
No wonder people on the review section on some stories think that the author is dead, specially after they leave a note like that, i just hope that he's ok and taking his time with this story but who knows? a random update could happen any time.
Angel's demonic shadow 26 chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
Ok, so any and every lemon request will be given the Dio treatment
( watch?vbti1b77_Hjc)
Itzmeall chapter 10 . 12/14/2012
thats ok...but how long will you post the story bu any chance?
Ricardo the Black Hawk chapter 10 . 9/16/2012
Xephos yogcast stole this story
Ricardo the Black Hawk chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Xephos yogscast stole this story
Spirit of Azure chapter 10 . 6/26/2012
No need to tell us, we'll wait!
Spirit of Azure chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Lol that's what I said when I had to imply a mating scene.
Spirit of Azure chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
this is the best rewrite of the movie I've ever seen, keep it up! Although I think Blu is a bit too confident in the story.

Sierra out.
Kraft58 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I just started reading this, for your first fanfic this definately isn't bad, in fact its really far from that, it's really good.

I think 95% of the writers on this archive could learn from your example, if they took the time to read this (You guys know who you are)

I am sorry that I can't be of much help in this one review, I will attempt to give a much more detailed critique for the next chapter.
The King Of Ownage chapter 10 . 6/21/2012
good.
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