|Reviews for One Change can make a big Difference|
| Sphix macaw chapter 10 . 5/12
um sorry next few days its been years can you please contine
| monsterjamvadim chapter 10 . 5/4/2016
| monsterjamvadim chapter 9 . 5/4/2016
NAME THE KIDS
CARLA BIA AND TIAGO
| RIOLOGY chapter 10 . 2/13/2016
Yup. I think the author is dead. Rest in peace... R.I.P '(
| Calvin chapter 5 . 5/23/2015
Have you written a lemon that has happened in the story chapter? If not, then I think you should write it.
| juanpablobro chapter 10 . 1/27/2015
No wonder people on the review section on some stories think that the author is dead, specially after they leave a note like that, i just hope that he's ok and taking his time with this story but who knows? a random update could happen any time.
| Angel's demonic shadow 26 chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
Ok, so any and every lemon request will be given the Dio treatment
| Itzmeall chapter 10 . 12/14/2012
thats ok...but how long will you post the story bu any chance?
| Ricardo the Black Hawk chapter 10 . 9/16/2012
Xephos yogcast stole this story
| Ricardo the Black Hawk chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Xephos yogscast stole this story
| Spirit of Azure chapter 10 . 6/26/2012
No need to tell us, we'll wait!
| Spirit of Azure chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Lol that's what I said when I had to imply a mating scene.
| Spirit of Azure chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
this is the best rewrite of the movie I've ever seen, keep it up! Although I think Blu is a bit too confident in the story.
| Kraft58 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
I just started reading this, for your first fanfic this definately isn't bad, in fact its really far from that, it's really good.
I think 95% of the writers on this archive could learn from your example, if they took the time to read this (You guys know who you are)
I am sorry that I can't be of much help in this one review, I will attempt to give a much more detailed critique for the next chapter.
| The King Of Ownage chapter 10 . 6/21/2012