Reviews for Letter from an unknown
mastfic chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
This is a good series but a lot of the words are miss placed and the quotation marks are in the wrongs places just some friendly advice:-)
Charlie B.Barkin chapter 5 . 4/26/2011
That was much better, now it makes things clear well, the chapter was pretty nice, you're making a very simple plot, that is something very good for starters.
Charlie B.Barkin chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
-_-' You didn't need to go that far.
Charlie B.Barkin chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
was nice would be good if you review the speaches, I'm getting very confused sometimes because the phrases are not well separated from the narration that's easy to luck on your updates.
Charlie B.Barkin chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
Flo is on SF?Why would she come?Weird...nice chapter!
Charlie B.Barkin chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Ok, the bulldog is named Charlie?I've got confused.