|Reviews for SOUL
| HollBeth chapter 14 . 8/25/2023
Gah. I'm in love with these two. I'm revisiting Twific as I had abaondoned it (mostly) 10-ish years ago. I revisited my favorite authors page and am working through yours. I read this, then. I know I did. It's familiar but new again, and I never noticed until two chapters ago that it is not complete.
Ah, well. It was beautiful up to this point, and I can imagine a future for them that - while not without doubts and worries - was hard won and much adored by both.
Thank you for sharing your gift - you are a gifted writer and I love your words.
| twificfan chapter 14 . 1/5/2023
| Sandy79 chapter 14 . 10/17/2021
I really wish you had finished this story. It is one of the best I have read. I soul love to know if Bella and Edward made it. I'm going to assume they lived HEA.
| Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 8/29/2021
I loved so much this story, so well written, so romantic and funny. Thank you for sharing. I hope you are doing fine.
| shannon30033 chapter 14 . 1/7/2021
Hello! You have stopped writing this years ago, but I still wanted to thank you for all of the hard work. I enjoyed it. I was sorry not to hear how Rose would have chewed Edward out for ignoring her visit. As for the main story, I’m sure EB figured it out together. He’s probably writing and following her around the world while she looks at spiders. I’m sure hey are deliriously happy. Who wouldn’t be with a boxer-bod Edward?
| PennyLynn chapter 11 . 9/19/2020
Loving this story. Ah are do rarely dine well. You are an excellent writer and observer of human nature.
| Pattts chapter 14 . 9/5/2020
Me encanta la forma en la que estás escribiendo esta historia. Desde que iba a la mitad pude notar que probablemente esta así terminar pero decidí arriesgarme lamentablemente llegue al último capítulo y mis esperanzas de que algún día actualices son casi nulas ya que tu última actualización fue en el año 2013.
Así que si lees esto quiero agradecerte por el tiempo que le dedicaste y por compartir un poco de ti con nosotros, espero que estés bien y algún día llegue de nuevo la inspiración que sé que muchas estaremos esperando impacientemente.
Me encanta el Edward de esta historia tan maduro y reflexivo de la vida y la bella libre e independiente, es un cambio genial que me alegro de conocer, sé que su historia sería hermosa y juntos pero me encantaría saber qué sucede, lo que puedo imaginar es que ella se va y lo extraña al igual que el a ella y ahí es donde se da cuenta que realmente lo ama igual que a sus arañas y entonces ya viene él felices por siempre.
| Debs0608 chapter 14 . 5/24/2020
Is this the end? Beautiful friend? I have faith they will make it.
Great story. Would be so happy if u had more but it was lovely while it lasted. Thanks for writing.
| pbadeaux10 chapter 14 . 11/30/2019
This story has blown me away. I love, love it! Please come back and finish it!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/6/2018
Omg! How did I not notice this wasn’t finished?! Nooooo! That was so jarring...I really hope one day you got back to this amazing story, I NEED to know what happens with these two!
| ninny 1 chapter 13 . 4/25/2018
This is the second time I’ve read this intriguing story I’ve loved it both times I just wish there was more
It doesn’t seem finished
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2018
Why is Edward trying out so many girls? Hes kissing rose, hes straight up making out with alice, he touching tanyas boobs.
Rose, Alice, and Tanya...he shouldn't be touching anyone of them. His sisters from twilight and the cum dumpster.
I'm fucking done, I cant read anymore of this garbage.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2018
so Edward is what? gonna lightly lust his way through every female in twilight until he gets to bella?
| LaPumuckl chapter 14 . 1/29/2018
I'm sorry to see this wasn't - as I expected - a completed story and since it's been years since you stopped writing it, probably won't be continued...
But if you still think about it, be assured you'll have at least one person waiting to find out what happens next for them - all of them not only Bella and Edward; )
| ninny 1 chapter 14 . 8/2/2017
Oh my god no this is a wonderful story like Edwards writing it makes you crave more I hope you decide to finish bella and Edwards adventure