|Reviews for One|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27
You are a very talented writer and the relationship of ?Tsubaka? and Maka is amazing/sweet and suprisingly awethentic
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
O my gosh i sooo loved this story! really really well written!
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT A-HOLES chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
The ending is so cute ! I love it!
| nekonotaishou chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Fantastic one shot. Made even better by the fact that it's a "long ass" one. Thoroughly loving the character that's so prominent in this. Love every sentence.
| AccendoAnimus chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
| LuckyTurtle chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Aha oh gosh I just adore the ending! Nice job
| snowygirl55 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This is so cute and even somewhat canonical! :D
| LilBammy chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This is unexpectedly good. I was really surprised by how well thought out it was. Complimenting your writing style would be redundant, as you probably already know good it is... :P Seriously, I don't usually read one-shots but this one caught my eye, and I wasn't disappointed. :) You should consider writing more SoulxMaka. :D
| blythe dragon chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Let's not forget putting on socks fresh from the dryer - that's a sensual pleasure too (especially on cold nights), one that shouldn't be dismissed. XD
Love this long ass one shot. Warm 'n fuzzy feelings tingled my toes as I read it, and the flow was nice and smooth, drawing me in. I likes it! :D Especially how you portrayed Maka and Soul's "normal" moments. I think those type of moments make up the bulk of their relationship, and it's always a pleasure to read a fanfic that describes those moments in a way that allows one to believe that regardless of what happens, Maka and Soul will be just fine in the end. I'd say you got it in one with "One"!
| popcorngoo chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Yes. YES. YEEEEESSSSS! do you have any idea how many feels I have right now? FEEEELS! ugh. My body is freaking on fire thanks to you. I never know quite how to review your stories because they evoke such FEELINGS and I don't know how to put them into words, but by Gawd they're intense. This is an amazing story and j want to thank you for taking the time to sit down an write it.
| sweetwithobsessions chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Soul should be the one to have the male anatomy. XD good oneshot -thumbs up-
| MissTwila chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I really liked it! Keep it up!
| blazerules34 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
I love the ending! Especially when they kiss, and when Tsuabki says "I told you so. " "Shove it, Tsubaki. "Ahahahaha, thats funny! Good job!
| xxBurningxx chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Woah...I've just reread this and I've no idea why I didn't review the first time...
This is so awesome. You've captured Maka's emotions exceptionally well, and everyone is in character.
And I love how Maka is like, "Holycrapholycrapholycrap" over eery single little thing, luls.
And the bit about Kid and Crona? That was priceless, I love how Liz is like: o_O
I've always seen Crona as a girl though (since I read the manga first)...
This was very awesome, good job.
| msknowitall chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I love it, I can see it in my mind and your characters aren't at all out of character. I really like it.