Reviews for Ninja's Dance
Exorcist Pirate chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
love it! love it! love it!
the ending was so damn funny!
they were waltzing wernt they? cos my mind kept drifting to the youtube vid - NO.6 beile- i think thats what its called! i think that the 2 people waltzing in that are the 2nd cutest not really couple much, couple! they even LOOK like kanda and allen!its from an anime
I love this story!:)
XxHate's-A-Strong-WordxX chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Never have I read a fic with the game Ninja with it; I love the game XD
"Kiss him again," I was thinking the same thing as the fellow fangirl, lol.
Kawaii fic.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Dude did I just read that right. They really gave fansucve to a bunch of girls. hell Im one of the girls
Universal Sweetheart chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Holy shit i really loved it more than anything, i love it! I love it so much! I really want you to continue! pretty pretty please don't make it a one shot, continue! continue!
0Book0Worm0 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
SQUEE! I loved it especially the ending.
moniqe007 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Okey. When I read "ninja dance" in my head was one question: wtf? But really, dance and fight... nice comparison:D
spirit of the white fox chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I loved the ending, they were just so cool with girl watching them makeout. Now thats AWESOME
xxjaegrrr chapter 1 . 5/7/2011

'kiss him again!'

that was awesome!
DevilPrincessOfDarkWorld chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Seems Ok enough and well cliche are wat make life cute and dramatic
PissyNovilest chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I love the story. It's real cute and shows a new side to Yu. I have read many fanfics about allenxYu and they were not as good as this one.
judalscock chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Great now I have a sexy scene in my head! XD I love it!
13thReflection chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
LOL, i love it!
Honoka-Chan chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Lol one of the best stories I've ever read xD btw loved the ending :D
Thrice the Double U chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Is the romance theme cliche, yes, but you know what you did different? You made it so that the two were on EQUAL grounds, not one is better than the other or one is constantly bullied. You could work on the description of places if you want. You don't have to go full-blown crazy on it, just add a little description. Here's an example: Allen stepped into the gymnasium, it's floors as golden and shiny as ever. His eyes surveyed the area in search of the person he was supposed to meet. They fell upon a tall figure sitting on the cerulean wrestling mats.
asdasdsdfsdf chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
haha! "kiss him again" great job! Also you have GREAT TASTE IN MUSIC! I love the song Viva La Vida! :P I look forward to see if you make more Kanda/Allen fics :P


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P.S. Abosolutly WONDERFULL your a natural at this :P