Reviews for Dark Child I: The legacy is born
Idealist101 chapter 13 . 7/17/2014
I don't think slade would work for trigon after what happened. Slade is always after his own self gain. And why on these stories do they have both Raven and her daughter get pregnant and make the family tree so confusing. I mean Xander's gonna have a younger uncle.
Guest chapter 19 . 2/17/2014
What is this shit?
the cynical critic chapter 19 . 9/12/2013
to sad im sorry but its the truth
the cynical critic chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
why are they all girls?
GachaGachaGirl chapter 19 . 2/1/2013
damn it, now im all scared! im preg and now im freakin out bout havin a baby .
xxxHathorxxx chapter 19 . 10/27/2012
Why did u end it there? It was getting so good
OmegaFoxy chapter 14 . 7/27/2012
I actually really like what you're going with, but have just a small structural criticism from reading your work. You're very knowledgeable about pregnancies and babies, but the interaction between characters is just a bit lacking. it comes across as if they are just ok with all this, like there's not enough meat to the story lol but other than that I really like it so far, not sure about the whole mom and daughter pregnant at the same time thing though, that's just odd because jerry springer was on the TV when I was reading about it and I started laughing! I hope I didn't offend you!
Yondaimeslegacy chapter 19 . 7/26/2012
So I am just going to do a limp review as best I can since I started crying back in 18. I love the story. I really do. I laughed, cried, raged, and squee'd with joy. Jayda leaving was just wow. Leaving behind everyone she loves to try and save them. Then Rae. I can't even imagine knowing you're about to die and having to tell your kids. I got so caught up in read this, I was reading in between test breaks even. Lol
Anthony1l chapter 19 . 5/9/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
ForestEmerald chapter 19 . 1/19/2012
The story was wicked! Can't wait to read Dark Child II.
Katwizzle chapter 19 . 11/22/2011
amazing!
onetikakawachi chapter 19 . 8/14/2011
this was so sad i cried wen raven died i jus really hope dis isnt how dis story end
BBsevolEAR chapter 10 . 7/13/2011
HOLY FUCK-NUGGETS! :o

THE KIDS HAD SEX! :O

RAVEN AND BB HAD SEX ON THIER 1ST DATE! :O

WHAT THE HELL!

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Still a great story! :)

Sorry 4 the outburst. ;
MaxandFang101 chapter 19 . 5/30/2011
The day I decide to pick up this story, and you leave me with a Cliff Hanger? Ugh. I hate my luck. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
littlemissfg chapter 19 . 5/30/2011
Jayda nooooooooooo! your mother wanted her granddaughter to have a mother, but instead your leaving her! i feel soooo sorry for jayda, and Raven (fingers crossed she comes back to live!) anyway keep it up xx
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